I think the most common collective terms for dragon are likely
a flight of dragons, a weyr of dragons or a wingof dragons
though regardless of the term you i doubt he dragons themselves will mind so i expect you are safe using lounge

Oops :3

Dragon's got a Dragon mum :3

BOOYA! DRAGON RESCUING TIME! Hermione would be so proud that you saved it from a life of misery.

This is so great

Okay, I'm dying here. you're wonderful story is keeping me from sleep because it's so damned good.

Minor nitpick: thought it was fait accompli , not fate accompli.

Also, I now have an image of a dragon with mom face. Thanks for that!

"Thus, less than an hour after breakfast, eight people were sitting around a large round table. Seven were drinking tea. The three American witches were drinking coffee."

i was counting the number of people..I'm not sure is this right? Were George and Fred included in this meeting?

I found it funny about there not being an investigation for Umbridge until there was a complaint. ...I kind of doubt it matters whether or not how to do so is told.
Hmm... Draco probably shouldn't have helped Mia revive himself. He was weak, maybe Draco and Black could've defeated him together before anything happened.
This story got quite dark near the end, didn't it?

I like the bit about using Casper to keep Harry from talking. Also... I hope the school doesn't think Draco defeated Voldemort. If they think that, there'd be a big shock, and more hating him than there was before. Also, I think if I was Draco, I would apologize to Harry for not winning.
Lupin really should've let Draco in on the plan.

Aww, Draco would've had a sister. (well, a different sister)
Hmm... Mia's being a bit nice to Draco, isn't he? Draco started daydreaming, and he didn't seem to mind when Draco said as much. It also seems like Draco's hesitated before saying 'master' a few times. (though, I believe I was mainly thinking about one particular fanfiction where Voldemort gets upset with every little thing said. He could be a little different than that.)

Hmm... that didn't go well. I think Dumbledore would've said there was another way if Draco had thought of it. Why not just portkey away from them? There was the cup and the coin, and Draco could've gotten himself and Black away without anything happening. Might not achieve much, but at least it wouldn't help him. Now Draco's missing a hand, and Voldemort's stronger.
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I think it may have turned out better if Draco hadn't tried staying alive, actually...

Hmm... I wonder why Potter has decided that Draco is the chosen one.
Too bad about the tag-along. Hmm... I hope Black doesn't die.

Interestingly enough, I've relatively recently gotten into the habit of sometimes trying to cover my mouth and nose while sneezing (in the author's note, you mentioned reading Calvin and Hobbes and a mention of what would happen if you did that). ...It can hurt a little bit with the force of it. But, I'm not sure I ever achieved completely covering both my nose and my mouth. When eating, I'll keep my mouth closed and I'll sneeze out my nose. During church a few days ago, I tried covering at least one of them, if not both, to try stopping or silencing it, and it still came out but with a bit of a choking sound. Hmm... that probably wasn't as interesting as I thought it'd be.
Well... so far, I found it a bit funny about Draco being told he should've kept the girl with him the whole way, and the suggestion of taking away points when Draco used the 'stole the portkey from Black' excuse. Too bad he couldn't just say that someone gave it to him for emergencies, but I guess it'd be a bit suspicious... (or at least, if it was me and I'd claimed I had a friend in a high place or the like, as I'd probably say something like that)
Hmm... Did something come up to cause those three (Lupin, Harry, and Neville) to agree that Draco should have some extra defense tutoring?
I'm surprised I followed what Adrem said, as well as only later realizing she had used words like 'cotton' (when students expressed their non-understanding of what she said). I guess I've watched too much TV that had characters talking that way. Now, me picking up on English stuff, I don't mind. Sometimes I'll start spelling words the English way if I see enough English words in what I'm reading. English people always sound so proper. And the lower class sounds both proper and improper at the same time (strangely enough). Hmm... now that I think of it, I think I can usually understand accents on TV, but I'm really bad at understanding people with accents in real life. At least one or two Indian Indian teachers I'd had, it took me maybe a few months to finally understand what they were saying during class.
Something's up with Potter. That was the second time he gave Draco an odd look. There's something he knows, or suspects, or something. I'd like to know what he's thinking and why. Perhaps he saw the coin the Draco had? Perhaps saw Mr. Weasley sneak it back to him? Or something else, but of a similar sort...
Hm? If I saw where Mrs. Black explained something about Voldemort to Draco that would help, I can't remember what it was. But I think I'd remember whenever it's mentioned.
I wonder how this will play out (for the final task)...

I wonder how much is monitored about those trails. I mean, is there anyone to watch and see what happens? Though, if there were, the girl probably would've been taken out way before that.
Hmm... Draco should've thought of something he could do to speed up the process of leaving the forest. I'm sure there's a few creative spells or charms or whatever he could've used to that effect.

Was there a reason that McGonagall wrote the poem? Hmm... well, I guess I also hope Draco feels better later. Seems he's remembered too many sad things. I would like to remember as much as I can about myself if possible (I had spent years collecting physical memories so I wouldn't forget who I was - seems it didn't bother me nearly as much as I had thought it would when most of them were lost). Though, I guess there are things I had purposely not thought about at times, and having to remember those things and too clearly would probably bother me.