Great job with this story so far I can’t wait to read the next I would love to so kushina in the pair it would really make the story more interesting.

Great I love it
When will we continue?
Yeah Naruto Harem hehe Tsume, Mabui, Anko will have to add more in Harem Kurenai, Samui, Kushina, Mei Hana, Yugao, Yugito Tsunade and others except Hinata and Sakura of course
That Naruto wins the Chunnin exams but becomes Jonin hehehe

More please

loving the story but really need to correct your grammar

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

Hi I love the story I hope you are still updating it. But please no kushina. But I would like kourina.

this is gud why no update?
1. she is naruto's aunt
2. regret that gaara had to live a life like his, but worse
3. maybe kill sakura or sasuke
4. yes, and he is captured by leaf anbu

NOW THAT I WROTE YOU A STORY FRAME...UPDATE!

Come on the grammar was shit and you even have beta, someone's not doing their job right

update pls pls pls

I'm not trying to flame, but I find this to be very poorly written. It's a good concept, but the poor grammar, syntax, and back-n-forth between English and Japanese terms for the same word make it very difficult for me to invest my time into reading it. My apologies if this review offends you.

Kushina in the harem with Naruto HELL YES along with her daughter(s).

Hi I have just started reading your story it is a good story just a very few mistakes like putting raikaze instead of raikage

I agree to Kushina being in the pairing...have Naruto get to know her and he'll see she isn't so bad...maybe send them on a mission together? maybe undercover where they have to pose as a couple?

Well I recommend you to rewrite this story or get a beta reader, considering English is your first language your language skills need to be improved. The grammar and spelling heavily affect the reading experience in a negative way.

I look forward to the next chapter.