Interesting...

At first I was a bit iffy about this story but I continued as it was a bit interesting. .. The beginning was short, rushed and seemed to jump all over the place but as I kept reading your writing got better and more details added. I really liked enjoyed itthank you for sharing it with us

this story was BADASS! pleasssssssee do a sequel! im begging you!

yes! i like your story very much! please,continue! *claps n whistles*

please sequel

Esplendido...

Doesn't matter how short the Chapter is a s long as it bring the story along. lets just go kill Eddie. so has everyone forgotten about Caius?

everyone loves Nessie,this is turning into some thing I can't i want is for eddie to blow away in the don't know how this will play with Nessie with her daddy dying.

Bye,bye Eddie been nice knowing you ...not.

Aro done screw up royal this time. I just hope there isn't going to be some kind of twist where he gets what he is after.

ok so what in the hell is going on this story just bounces all over the place,what was with the rape scene what does it have to do with the story?

I don't understand why people aren't liking this ,unless there are a bunch of team eddie haters out there that stopped reading after his decided to run off and pout like the little bitch he is.

I am pretty sure Aro might have gotten that wrong.

so what is Drama Queen Eddie boy going to do?

so many Vamps. are going to die it will be glorious to see.