Good story.

That was good!

Hahaha you this was fun to read, though you could have made it slightly more gory on Hermione's part. I like how you poisoned Harry! And BTW, you should have used a semi-colon in the first sentence. You're messed up (in the right way) angst always makes me laugh! Write more! And start writing music so you can do your own song fics-you'd kick ASS

Oh my goodness! That made me cry, it was amazing!

I've never really gone for the whole Hermione Harry thing, but this was so good, i actually kinda liked the idea. Thatnk you for writing it, in a strange way, this also kinda cheered me up, because it's so beautifully written, but also made me really sad! Great work!

Xx Lyra xX