This is so powerful and very vivid, and I'm astounded at how you've said so much in such a small amount of words. Perfect. (:

This was mind-blowing; perfect in every sense of the word! Even though it was so short, you captured James's emotions and thoughts perfectly well. Regulus, on the other hand, was a surprise. I never imagined his character quite like you wrote him, but I definitely enjoy this side of him, too. The way he acted just seemed fitting.

I love your writing style. It seems so soft and floating, while still drawing me in. I especially adored this line: "Only this time James doesn't know how to catch this butterfly. Regulus may seem young enough to be seduced over with potions and spells but in the end, James knows that magic is not the way he will win this beautiful specimen onto his fingertips. Words, then, are the only answer of which he can think." - It just describes their relationship best.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us, and keep up the great work! :)

Awe. :)

Cute!

There needs to be more James/Regulus love. ;)

I lovvvved it! :D

INteresting... I've only recently discovered the beauty and potential of this pairing and I like the subtlety and imagery of this fic... so thanks :)

Beautiful. Sweet and innocent, just like James is at that age. I enjoyed this.

nice

i like it

The writing in this is really good! And I'm glad I found some JamesReggie, it's so hard to come by, and when you do find it, the writing isn't usually very good. So this was a gem! :)

-Rolls on the ground happily-

This is so pretty. 3 I love James/Reg 3

Ah, two young purebloods in love...and a jealous brother to boot.

Aw, that was adorable! Oh, and I totally agree with Sirius' hypocrisies. It IS okay to manhandle your own guests.
~Cinder

I love it

O.o THAT WAS AMAZING! Eh, sorry about that little outburst but it had to be said. This was possibly the best story I've read in a really long time. I don't think I've ever read a story with these two for the pairing but now I've got to look. There's not a lot of actual romance but you can kind of feel the chemistry between them. I feel really sad for both of them though because they end up dying. Anyway I have to say this once again, Epic story!