Good story. You should also do a fanfiction about Kibosh Casper's enemy from Casper A Spirited Beginning and Casper's haunted Christmas finding out about Casper's human girlfriend Kat and kidnapping her to lure Casper into a trap.

Cute, alot of spelling and grammar errors, though. Keep up the good work

I love this fanfiction it's awesome pleas write more like it I especially like how casper is more passionate and outgoing and nice description keep it up

Oh-Freaking-Dorible! Omg! Gotta love it!

Good job continue as soon as you can

Hey I like this alot! Great job! I love it how Casper comes to life at the end. It's hopefully more permanent than in the movie...

Just work on spelling. That is my only suggestion and criticism.

And I like the part where Kat says she'll keep getting older and older and Casper will stay the same age forever. It kinda reminds me of Bella and Edward from "Twilight."

Again, great job! :D