Come on man I wanna know what happens the next day!

I got a good laugh out of this. Like that other person said with the humor thing, yeah. that.
pretty much everything he said. This needs a part 2 imo :P

that was so funny i think yosuke really would do that lolz that was super fun to read u should make another one i wanna kno wat happenes in the morning it would be akward but hilarious

I'm not so sure this one would qualify as "Angst" - I chuckled enough times at the situation and Yousuke's thoughts and reactions that I would consider it "Humor." Hopefully, you'll take that as the compliment it's meant to be. :)

I really like the descriptions of the room, and the little details about how neither one of them is really interested in studying. Yes, good students, they are not. :)

There are a couple of little grammar errors (missing punctuation for "Doubt it." and "Nothing[,]" he sighed), and a couple of misspellings (Yosuke [hopped] onto his bike), but overall the story reads at a quite nice pace, which is fitting for a little vignette like this.

It's also amusing to see Yousuke's quick progression of thought from affection to desire to anxiety to action and fulfilment...and then very quickly to horror and self-loathing. And it's AWESOME for me to see it happen between two characters that I 'ship so rabidly...so you know that I've got to add this to my Favorites.

Very nice work! :)