Ow i loveeee it! You make me fall in love with goku...you keep their personalities, also the plot was so interesting. Thanks for writing about them... I would like to read more of your stories about them.

I remember reading this story so many years ago. And I am so happy that it's finally finished. Perfect ending.

Me gusta mucho tu estilo de escritura. Pero hubiera deseado algo de lemon, je je. Pobre la Chichi que queria recordar creo que se merecia revivir esa primera vez con su amado esposo, siendo Goku por primera vez quien deba dirigir ese momento intimo.

I loved this chapter :)

Hay que dulce fue Goku tan lindo. Me gusta que él sea quien la enamore

It's nice that Goku and Chichi has gotten closer. But Chichi never called Goku an idiot...

I know I'm 5 years late, but yeah, I just wanna say:

Good: Goku is very in-character! The story itself is pretty interesting, too, and despite the fact that it's romance/drama, I can imagine something like this happening in the DBZ universe (off-screen, of course). Needs improvement: There's wrong word usage every 2 paragraphs.

Aw, this was so sweet. I love this couple!

this is so good. No, it's great.. great job :)

Aaah what a cute story! You are a very good writer :)

Oh and I would like to add that this was another awesome story of yours! Well done :)

Aww goku and chichi are really a cute couple!

Ah another great plot! and they are not ooc at all :)

good starting...can't wait to read more.

This is a pretty good story. I like it. I see you havent updated in a few years. Shame. Ah well.

Your other stories are just as enjoyable too!