cool

nice

very interesting

if you wanted to. you could've just made anko their captain. you basically made kurenai anko

So, you cancelled a fanfiction basically because you couldn't write smut? Honestly, there was no sex in this story, but you can write a story without sex in it you know. I guess writing as of late has become so lacking in actual quality content that sex is a way to make it 'better.'

hmmmm so i guess its safe to assume that naruto and kurama are at least on okay terms. interesting

Continue the story please

Oi, this art needs finished mate.

I SORELY wish you continue this sometime soon, as well as your other Naruto fanfics! They're all awesome, but at least the other ones feel they have SOME type of conclusion. I REALLY want to see sweet Naruto-kun blow away Sasuke and Sakura in the best way possible.

PLEASE tell me you'll continue this eventually!

I am with you MR. Alaska HOOPLA

AGAIN WITH THE DAMN CLIFFHANGER NO JUTSU IF YOU DO IT AGAIN I WILL SEND MY KILLING FRIENDS AFTER YOU I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!

DAMNIT STOP IT WITH THE DAMN CLIFFHANGER NO JUTSU DAMNIT IT IS FUCKING ANNOYING AND STUPID!

An other Good chapter. I hope you focus on Hinata.
I also don't mind Sasuke and sakura basin considering I think they deserve it in both the story and canon. I also like the fact that sasuke is not shining his fans,
p.s I don't want to sound bad but I hope that you chose someone different for the third member. All the other rookie nine would do kida, or Shino would help for a good tracker team with naruto and Hinata, or possible sai or yakumo would be wonderful. Unless you have something spectacular planed and a good reason why they are in a team. I understand hinata and naruto because they would work well together and bring out there full potential.

I love confident Hinata. Can't wait to see her in action and my I sagest to focus on her, but give Naruto at lest a few good sense to merck up for it. Hinata will sell this story.

Why...why must you authors always do this? Why do you start a story and just leave us...ME in suspense! UPDATE ! Plz plz plz plz UPDATE ! Your story is incredible plz UPDATE !