actually i saw that like 2 chapters ago so

Awesome story! Thank you for sharing.

See that's the reaction Bella should've had when Jake said that in New Moon. That's the correct response in my opinion. You'd rather me dead? Eff you too then!

The way you wrote Bella asking Carlisle to give her away was so touching. Immediate tears!

I really like this story

Loved it cant wait to read more of your stories

Great story! Looking forward to reading more of your work :-)

I LOVE this Story! I am rereading it for the 100th time!

This story was amazing! You left it open to a point making wonder what happens next. Are you planning a sequel? I hope so there are so many places that you could take this story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it.

the four best things you did in the story..got back at Newton,brought in Pete rand Charlotte,got Jasper and Bella together and gave them a daughter along with a stories always give them a son. the only other story i read where they had a daughter it was twins again but the baby girl was stillborn.

Let me guess she is pregnant.

Why should i start reading a story that you stopped writing on four years ago.i never understand if people aren't going to finish stories why don't they just delete them.

I think you need a better beta . A reason to exist is fantastic i just read it before i found this story.i like all of Cullen818's stories.

It's i won't let anything happen to you not, i want. it's we won't,not i want, get hurt,i promise just tell us the rest of your story,please Alice whispered.

You needed a Beta to tell you not to drop words or letters from words, it helps the story when the reader understands what they are 't wait for him to to try to get to her.