THE FEELINGS!

this was just beautiful ...n so damn heart clutching...sigh i neeD MOREEEEEEEEE

Aww, this was such a sweet story, I really enjoyed reading this! You're a very good writer

that was just beautiful life absolutely beautiful words can't discribe how awesome that was

A work of art. This story is brilliant!

This was such a sweet story! I wish it was longer, but I also admit that it's perfect the way it is.

I liked so much this story ... :')
Good job ! :3

OMIGOD THAT WAS SO FLIPPING ADORABLE! This entire story from start to finish just about killed me! I love how you started it with Kanda and Allen already having a professional relationship, and the way you used the trip with Kanda's family to dig into Allen's past and develop their relationship was gold! Everything felt really believable, Tiedoll was great, Lenalee was and AWESOME childhood friend, and the dialogue between EVERYONE helped build the story just as much as the naration did! Seriously, this was great, and I love you to DEATH for posting! Thanks!

awesome!

I can tell this was based of the Proposal but it was still a good story.
Nicely done and all

dude this was long but freaking awesome well from my point of view

I enjoyed this with a passion 3

This is one of the BEST Yullen I've ever read! I couldn't get enough of it! Gosh, I want more already

... This is based off "The Proposal," isn't it?
Oh, well. I like that movie.
You should've put in the part where Margaret is dancing in the woods with Granny.
"To the window! To the window! To the walls! To the walls! To tge sweatshirt down my b**ls! All you b*tches call!"

beautiful :)
(sequel would be nice :))