Damn Sasuke is one Horny Mother f*cker by the end of the day XD. These two being Sly dirty Nymphomaniacs while the children are in the house XD. I must agree Naruto gives excellent Blow jobs and Sasuke gives excellent Rim jobs. That sex was so fucking erotic and fierce mixing pain with pleasure feels really good (I would know) so adding that in was sexy as f*ck and I loved it. The way Naruto birthed his children brings shivers down my spine that must have been hell for him the poor darling. Awee the twins are adorable and talented also is Sasuke asking to be backhanded or something? Asking for a son after all the crap Naruto went through.

i need That threat!
Like seriously...

It was funny at first. but when everything included Kyuubi as well. And Sasuke was so smug about that. that pissmeoff!

After all their relationship should be about them, not Sasukyuubi.

So when Naruto threatened Sasuke that he will oh he really will leave him, i was like thank you god that Naruto is sane enough to disagree with Sasuke. To not accept about it.

I feel so bad for Naruto. It's break my heart.
because yeah, it was kinda more about Sasukyuubi and Naruto was like someone who being used.

it was well written though. great fic!

I love but needs less cock and more kissing

oh my.. you write naruto's personality not like any other authors i've read.. i like it. XD..
and this story i love it.. its a pity naru wont pregnant anymore.. XP..
thanks for wtiting

Woooow. I like fem kyuubi lol
So I had finish ties the bind and just HAD to read this pair.
I like this side of them. Especially since there both a dominate pair.

This story was def. Crazy but I loved it.

Thank u for writing and sharing it

omg this was awesome! A little creepy, but awesome!

I loved it finally in one of the many of fanfics I've read there's a naruto who's threaten to leave sasuke n sasuke begging him not to leave,In all of the oters naruto is always so stupid n let sasuke do whatever he wants with him so credits for that

I normally don't read Mpreg stories, seeing as I just don't prefer them. I often think the reasons for male pregnancies are unbelievable, but I like your story. I think it seems plausible Kyuubi would change the entire internals of Naruto concerning the circumstances you've created. The fact that you brought out how Naruto suffered during the changing pleased me as well, so it wasn't just all fun and games.

I'm intrigued by this story and it saddens me slightly it's not longer. I must say I was surprised at that gore part, it scared me slightly! It seemed so much like a scene taken from a horror movie and the way you describe the children... I can't help but to wonder what problems, intrigues, charades they might cause in the future, if this went on!

You have a very personal way of writing, I don't think I've ever come across someone who writes just like you. Of course everyone writes independently, but your independence is very noticeable.

iLoveYourWriting. Your a good author...im in love with ur stories XD im happy i found u!

naughty Naruto. (giggles) well I love this chapter the Kyuubi thing was funny. vary vary good.

First if all, I really love your story except for the part wherein Kyuubi has some feelings for Sasuke. Dunno, i just felt that Naruto and Kyuu might compete for the love of Sasuke. And somehow, it felt like Naruto was just being used as an instrument for reproduction. But oh well, we can't deny the fact that h really is the Father/Mother of those kids Biologically speaking. Haha:)) this story is also unique, since it's the first one I've ever read in which Kyuubi/Naruto is/are (not really sure how to address them) eating raw meat. That one was really disturbing and yet it is still acceptable :) keep up the good work! :)) thank you for posting such creative fiction :))

Ah, only naruto..Smh

Haha! Love the last sentence. "Feel like fucking?"

That was cute how Sasuke loves Naruto so much.

XD this was so good! Couldn't help but wanna kick Sasuke in his ass tho lol

Awww, really cute story, I especially like the last part of it. Lol.