Love to read this

oooh i luv this story its very different i mean many stories like these there is always goku who is feeling uncomfortable bieng near chichi but in his one chichi is rejecting i mean she is not ready for it usually its goku who is not ready for that thing soo i lov big fan of chichi n a fan of gcc

ooh god why dont they just sit down n talk about there problems goku should tell chichi about his feelings nn plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooon this story is written very expertly i luv it soo plzzzz update

ooh its an excellent start poor chichi is scared

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this story is really good. Chi-Chi & Goku weren't that out of character.. good job! I just hope there will be a continuation soon... :(

That was a great story! :-P

My gosh! Chichi!

What had happened?

wow! ur good! this story was really good! i sometimes wonder, how chichi,was able 2 give birth 2 Gohan. how must she have explained it 2 HIM! LOL

keep writin! _

~.~.~REGARDS~.~.~

i love it

Very good story I enjoyed reading it! :) plz update asap!

When it comes to stories about the beginning of Goku and Chichi's new marriage it becomes quickly apparent that it is not easily done while remaining believable. This story is one of the few that capitalize on Goku's innocent behavior. Chichi's behavior is a little less cannon but you did a very good job of explaining her sudden change in personality. In the anime after Goku proposes marriage to her she pretty much takes control of everything. This leaves me to believe that Chichi would teach everything to Goku. I think that this is every woman's dream the ability to mold their innocent man however they please. Anyway I really hope that you update soon. I would like to know what happened to Chichi.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

gah nice chapter i wonder where chichi went? anyways keep writeing i wanna find out how this story ends

This is cute. Really cute. I can't wait to see what happens next and what is going on with Chichi.

However, you really should acquiant yourself with the 'enter' key. The huge paragraphs are unwieldy and make it pretty easy to get lost when reading. I saw the fourth chapter and kind of sighed to myself. It sounds kind of harsh, but it's true.

Everytime somebody new is speaking, the focus is on someone/something else or when there's new action, there should be a new paragraph.

Though maybe it's just the site eating your format. That's why I check when I post something new.

Good luck on future chapters. :)