Someone just watched Chicago, I see... :)

Brilliant. I love how well you incorporated the HP characters into the Chicago plot line. Magnificent. Loved it.

Hermione is one bad lieutenant er, investigator/psychologist/sociopath...

I like that you mixed it up a bit with not necessarily having sex happen in each room and having one person released, and some actually guilty and one that she really cares for.

Sure it's messed up, but with this one I'd say it's good and the perfect length.

I'm a bit confused with ending though about Luna.. Anyway, it was good fic..

Keep on writing.. :D

I see that your main inspiration for this was Chicago :) Was interesting with the Harry Potter take on the murders. The warning shots into the head, and Ron running into her knife. Glad to see another fan of the brilliant play!

Omfg, I love your story! Hermione was brilliant, the losers' deaths too!..and it was intersting because i've only can see Hermione with Pansy (very angst too) and now, all this pairings float in my head.

i absolutely loved it. to be honest, it actually got me off harder than mast of the other dark smut fics i've read.

Very Interesting One-shot I enjoyed reading it!

Well, what to say... I thought this fic was brilliant

I would love to read more like this, though I doubt anyone else would be able to do it like the way you presented this.

I look forward to seeing more work from you in the near future.

Natalie

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love the murders. lol so great :)

Interesting. I liked it though.

-Kate

Wow all that and you still managed to make Fleur the most important. I like the bit with Luna at the end.

And I haven't seen you write a Hermione/Fleur in a long time :O glad to see you back on it. Sorta.

Lovely job! Nicely written and it kept me wanting more the whole time! I can never get enough of your work

Thanks for the story!

I read this over on the hp_girlslash comm, and I have to say, I was a bit hesitant, because I'm not one to read fics that contain multiple pairings revolving around one character... but this was FANtastic. I was glad to see that Hermione/Fleur was the most important, however. But, that's because they are the most important. ]

Thank you for sharing.

hawtness :D i love how you added some of my fav hermione pairings lol. and again, u rock! XD