still best story lex/scar

this story is amazing!

I really enjoyed this story, I liked your character building. thank you for sharing x

Please don't try to explain what you think you've done wrong.
You're doing just fine.

Great start but whyyyy do I have to remind ppl that Scar has blue eyes?
I'm hoping its creative liberties and not because you just didn't know.

A second is all that kids needs to get away you thick headed idiot XD

What are they gonna do? I'm curious now!

He's carrying Sebastian like a sack of potatoes and he sure doesn't like him, but doesn't want to just kill because it would upset Lex XD

It took me a while to read everything (I lost the tab completely at some point (on my phone)) but I finally finished and it was a wonderful read. I really enjoyed your show of the different relationships you had in here and the story progressive. Thanks for the Read!

I’ve been reading this sorry now for a few days and I can’t get over how impressive your writing skills are! It was an amazing reading experience and I truely loved the storyline! Well done. :)

I realllllllllyyyyyy LOVE this write! I can't stop re-reading it. )

This was probably one of the most well-written AVP ficitons I have ever had the pleasure of reading.

I love how the fiction and romance took time to unfold and that everyone wasn't as accepting or tolerant of her at first. The clan friction was well done as well, and I adored all of the OCs and their very specific personalities. The twins were among my favorite and Dice was a great addition.

I also enjoyed how you made it realistic. The struggles, especially feminine struggles, of living on a ship with a bunch of other aliens who may or may not understand her predicaments. Javelin was probably also another favorite of mine, and I adored how he acted the part of Lex's father.

Your expertise was absolutely refreshing in a sea of mediocrity and I cannot wait to see if you ever write another AVP fiction. I do have to say the content pool is a little slim.

In any case, thank you for the most wonderful read.

Best Regards,

-Shiroi

*squeals* I loved it! I hope you make a sequel but then again that was a cute ending and sad ones cause me to cry so i like where it ended. this story was beautiful. you have an amazing writing style that i absolutely LOVE

This was very good. I wasn't sure, at first, concerned with all the blushing and flirting but it smoothed out into something quite lovely and slow-paced which I love. I love a slow-burn story. It's the best. While I disliked Dart quite a bit, I still feel bad for him. He let rage and madness cover his eyes and sour his soul. Bad Blood indeed. The whole story arc with Xiera was exemplary. I love that you gave us Xenomorph thoughts, opinions, etc. I was dreading her possible death and I'm so glad that you decided not to kill her. Thank you for sharing this story with us on . Once again, exemplary story.

That was a wonderful fic. Thank you so much for writing it. Hope you do return to AvP eventually - I'd love to see what becomes of Lex, Scar and little Haven!