okok... this was actually a good makeshift ending! glad i read it, just sad there's no more to read:(

i love everything about this and i know im setting myself up for hurt but i can't help it i gotta keep reading kdjdjsjddje

Please keep writing this story

I hope this story is still on...

Ima be honest with u. This was actually a decent part to leave the story if u didnt wish to complete it. Like others leave some stories during cliffhangers and beginnings. I like this. It was SOOOO cute. I like how u made zuko such a gentleman qhen u put him helping toph with her hair. I like how we were able to their discomfort with the marriage, but also how they know eachother already, they can stand to not be so ...awkward...u know. Good JOB. I LUV IT!

What the hell. No you cannot just go on a hiatus without warning! Please your story is much too interesting to be abandoned.

I love how Zuko and Toph aren't awkward around each other after their marriage. Just loved how Zuko casually removed her shoes and smoothed her hair without embarrassment like in other fics. Reminds me of the NejiTen interaction in A Difference a Moment Makes. Anyway, I really hope you read my review and know that your story still lives. I'll be waiting for your update if you haven't abandoned this.

this series has been written so beautifully and you havent updated in so long. sad face.

this chapter was so beautiful written and paced out. A

I'm sad that you haven't continued this story in years, but what I did read was amazing. There was no rushing, and I feel like everyone is in character. I honestly think Toph and Zuko would have made an adorable, loveable pairing. :)

Pleeeeaaaase update! I'm addicted so much I'm actually re-reading

Omg man this is like the one of the best toko fics out there you must update, I know its been a long time but this fic is so brilliant its just sad to leave it like this

Congrats on your marriage

Is there more of this?! I want to see Fire Nation fall apart with Toph as the Queen! Hahahahahaha okay kidding! Toph would make a super awesome Fire Nation Queen! Yeay Toph!

Pleaaaase update soon? I love this story and where it's going. I think it's wonderful and very original. I'm really looking forward to when you update again!

Pls write more I LOVE toko