imagine this really happen in the series :o

all I can see is war not just from the pirates but female kind just drop kicking the marines in the nuts

I want to punch Nami. Really badly. Like seriously Luffy get mad at her, what she’s doing is not okay, if you feel like you’re a guy then you are, screw social expectation and conformity. And DRAGON, how dare you?! You are a sperm donor at BEST, and even if you weren’t, paternity DOES NOT give you the right to make executive decisions for your essentially fully grown son like what you did. So you need to be punched. Repeatedly. In the face.

Now that my anger is vented, it’s a very cool idea, and I would love to see something like this exploring dysphoria and how the world of One Piece would react to different gender identities and sexualities. So yeah. Very cool concept. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I hope you keep writing!

Loving this fic , absolutely loving it... the only thing is Ace . He’s super annoying to me right now. But that’s just my little nitpick . This fic is a 10/10

Luffy: Shanks
Shanks: Luffy
Luffy: Shanks
Shanks: Luffy
Luffy: Shanks
Gildarts: Gildarts i think shanks died and gildarts came in like a father figure and want to kill the man while zoro is sneaking off

oh Sanji is gonna be pissed to find out that zoro is gonna take nami and robin as his bride

why robin, why do you have to play this to see their reactions. im not mad but im laughing my ass off by reading what shes says

brook finally got to see luffy's panties

That's to mean and cruel why did you make zoro say that zoro cant love luffy just because he is a man now tags just to cruel and heartbreaking :( it shouldnt matter if luffy is a guy or a girl you should still love them the same. When I read this part a second time it reopened my wounds! You have no idea how painful and sad this is that you don't let zoro still love luff the sane way he did when he was a woman! They can still make love the same way and love each other just becuse they luffy had different genitals is stopping them from living each other is cruel! What matters are the soul and t here love for each other! Why did you make luffy feeling for zoro disappear men's feelings dont just disappear like that men have feeling to and they can fall in love with another man to it'so cruel that you are denyingoing them of that and what do you mean they used to have! They still have it as men they still have love for each other as men! Reading about women and men relationships kinda makes me sick now that you denied zoro and luffy true love! Luff just looks so emotionless twords zoro it'd so sad why did you make it like that! They belong together why arnt you letting then be together when they the same gender zoro can still love zoro the same way when luff was a girl luffy is still the same person regardless of gender I don't know why you changed his feelings because both men and woman have feeling! And men can still love each other! I'm kinds glad you discontinued this because this is just to cruel and dark it'd making me really sad I want then roll be together and love each other and not let gender get in the way! Youre so cruel and heartless and I can't never see then together now in this fanfiction together as men! And they still raised there kid together and luffy still acts motherly twords him so why can't he love zoro because men have feeling to this story is getting sexist that you sent letting luffy still havery the same feeling for zoro when he was a woman and technically she was still a man and still acted like it! Hormone change doent stop you from loving someone it doesn't change your feelings tword's someone even as a woman luff only loved zoro he never cared for other men! He was still the same person even as a woman so it was cruel of you for letting zoro say that he can't love luffy the same way and that he doesn't have the same feelings for him when he was a women luffy is still the same person genderived doesn't change the person that you are and that doesn't change you from loving the same person! They can still make love the same way just in a different place now! Ando they can still have more kids my mpreg! Mpreg is better anyway because there is so discrimination tword's gender! They don't do that to each other and they can still love each other they don't let the same gender get in the way because it'd true love! And it'd heartless of you to deny them there love just because they are the same gender that I'd just to cruel! :(... it's so sad I really want then to be together and it would be better if they where together as men anyway because luffy can still have kids a's a guy with mpreg! Zoro and luffy would be more in love that way anyway! So Zoro should still love luffy the same way when he was a women gender change should t stop then luffyou is still the same person it is you who made luffy so emotionless tword's Zoro luffy 's true lov every regardless of gender! What really matters is the person and gender doesn't matter! :(...

I don't like that you let luffy think in his mind that zoro was his wants lovers that's just to heart breaking and cruel why can't they still love each other just because he is a guy now he is still the same person regardless of gender! Gender doesn't stop you from loving the same person! This is just to cruel! And very sad they belong together regardless of gender! Why did you make luffy so emotionless twords zoro why did you let luffy feeling for zoro vanish? Because gender change doesn't stop you from loving the same person! It''s the soul and love that always counts! Why are you treating there love relationship so heartlessly! Why don't you let luffy love zoro he still has to have feelings for zoro! Because gender change doesnt stop you from loving someone this is just way to cruel and breaks my heart that they arnt together and they probably lever will now which breaks my heart even more and I will never get over this! It just hurts to much that I can't even cry it out and let everything out but this feeling will never go away now it's way to painful! This is way to dark and I usually like dark thing's and sad things but thus one just hurts and it's unbearable pain! They deserve it be together they belong together! They are each others true love! And you can't stop there true love even you! There are plenty of fanfiction where they are together as men and they still make love and luffy still conceives his kids and they ate very happy together! So why cant you make the story a happy one you can see how much they love each other and it'd cruel for you to take it away from someone it's ridiculous gender change doesn't stop you from loving someone! Gender change never takes away your feelings both men and woman have feeling and emotion regardless of gender! Love does not go away from gender change that's just stupid and wrong idea in a fanfiction! Fanfictions should be happy not sad and unfinished! You should let then lover each other ita wrong to keep true lovers a part just because of gender change that's just way to sad and hearless! :( I'm trying to cry and let it out that they will never be together! But the tears never come out thags hoe painful them not being together is! Just because they are both men that is ridiculous! Men love and fall inlove with other men all the time what's stopping them!

Luffy gender change shoudnt have changed anything about loving zoro it just doesn't work that way! Why arnt they together they must have been through a lot after becoming king of the pirates and zoro the greatest swords man! And they raised there kid together so there really is no reason for them not to be together! Using luff gender change as an excuse that they can't love each other is stupid! What happened to the feelings luff had for him as a woman just because she's a man now that doesn't change someone's feeling for there lover! So it'd cruel that you don't let luffy keep his feelings for zoro regardless of gender zoro has to love luff no matter what gender he is! Gender doesn't matter in love but the soul does matter and it really hurt that they can't be together because of than I try to cry and get over it but I just can't it'd to hard to get over thingd are always easier said then done trying to get over this is hard! But I still want them to be together in the end and gender shouldn't stop then because there are plenty of other fanfiction and they are still together and they have a kid to in that fanfiction I like it better because they are together! And they never fell out of love neither one of them and thas true love regardless of gender they are still in love and very happy together!

why cant zora love luffy the same way he did when luffy was a women. why cant luffy love zoro now that he is a man. gender change doesnt do that to you and chnge your feelings! its really sad and it hurts seeing they will never love eath other again ike they used to anf gender change shouldnt stop that! thats kinda stupid actuallyand what a shame you are a really good writer and it really hurts not seeing them together just because of gender change thats stupid that shouldnt stop them from loving each other im sure they really loved each other and that really shoudnt stop them! :(

i dont think i will ever get over this story :( it was really good and love dovey and very romantic in the begining but it changed just because luffy turned into a man and that doesnt really stop you form loving your true love regardless of gender change! they can still make love even when luffy is a man it just really breaks my heart that they wont be together. they have to be together! :( i just cant move on from this. this really left me feeling bitter! and really sad like some one punched a whole in my heart!

but really why cant they be together just becasue luffy is a guy now? why let zoro hesitate in loving luffy just because he is a man now! and why did you make luffy feelings change for zoro just because he changed genders that doesnt stop you from loving your true love! the feelings are the same regardless of gender! they should really be together even though they are both men there is nothing wrong with that! :(.. it really hurts not seeing such a great and loving characters not being togather just because of gender change its really heart breaking! im sure luffy would still love zoro even after gender change so they can continue loving each other :( and its really sad that zoro cant love luffy the same way as he did when luffy was a women gender shouldnt change how much you love someone zoro should love luffy exactly the same why when he was a women! gender doesnt change how much you love someone :( this is way to sad not seeing them together its unbearable pain!

they deserve a happy ending and they deserve to be together your kinds cruel not letting then love each other just because of gender change they should love each other exactly the same way they did bofore whats stopping them from doing that nothing really! gender change shouldnt stop them! luffy should have the same feelings for zoro to hormone and gender change would not stop you form loving the same peron they same way you where the other gender. it just doesnt happen that way!

but other then that you are a good writer but a bit cruel to let it end like this! all this not letting them love each other stuff shoudlnt have happen and they should have kept loving each other like nothing has changed between them when luffy went back to being a man! i think you dragged the story on for to long and just should have given them a happy ending a long time ago and them being happily together married even though they are both men and happy with there kids and zoro anf luffy still lovers as both men and them loving each other the same way like they did before and nothing has changed between them and the gender changed didnt stop the love between them like nothing has changed! i cant even cry it hurts so much not seeing them together and not having a happy ending

i think they are each others true love regardless of gender change that should stop you from loving thesame person any differnt because they are true lovers! i just dont think though but they really are each others true lovers

Why did you make luffy not love zoro when he turned into a man gender change doesn't stop you loving your true lover that's really sad and it really hurts me I really wanted to see then together and happy :( it really makes me sad and it really hurts! And why zoro doesn't love luff as much because hes not a woman anymore that's mean he should love luffy regardless he's a man or woman that's what true love is!

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