That was one of my favorite stories I’ve ever read here. Your Paul is amazing, Kris is hysterical. I love everything about this story. Thank you so much!

i really like your Paul. its nice to see an obviously flawed character be the hero of the story. it is refreshing that you didn't sugar coat Paul to make him all nice and gentlemanly but that you put an strong and cool oc against him. i read it in on go!

Interesting

Loved it, great story! I have a silly smile on my face now thanks to your talented writing. :) Where’s Embry’s story? I can’t find it...

I usually don't review until I am a bit more advanced in my reading, but I'm just enjoying this story too much! :) It's hilarious, I love the couple Kris and Paul make... they fit so well together! Thank you for posting this story, it's a great way to lift my spirits after a long day at the office.

So cute and Funny! Perfect!

I loved this so much! Even though there was a wee bit o'angst, I loved how they were together. This epilogue was perfect.

where is the sex?
just kiddin'
great sneek peek:)

what?
Noooooo
I thought it was a joke!
but then I looked at the chaps
and the next one is the epiliogue
maaaan
I'm so sad
they didn't even have sex?
they should have sex? no? I mean it is Paul were talkin' bout
Paul Lahote, there is an 'e' no? Or Lahot? na, Lahote
anyways? This fic is rated M
I just checked it is not. bloober
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yeah I know drama much.
Aaaah I love this story so much
they are so perfect for each other
and thier conversations are epic
I'll miss them
like really
like a lot
like a bunch
like(hum)
like

thank you

awing-great

oh my goodness?
I want to meet her!
Is it a SI?
god I love her sarcastique gruesome relies. I say somrthin' like this and get a weird look in reply.
AAAAArg it's killin' me

that would creep me the fuck out

I laughed my way through this fic. I sort of expected there was going to be some supernatural drama but I actually enjoyed that it was just their nice lighthearted love story. You'd thought it out so well and it was quite realistic. I liked how you focused on the missing each other feeling when she was away too rather than the imprint making it painful. All in all I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Great job!

Alright, that's just uncalled for. I was here for Kris' snark and everything, despite "whore" this and "slut" that, but tripping the waitress is too far. Annoying flirt or not, she didn't actually do anything to them... tripping her was just rude and unnecessary.

this is so cute...i'm not crying. you're crying.