so Splinter

absolutely him

I had to laugh so hard

really cool

okay 1:1

your turn, Leo

so funny

but it really gets juicy when hedgehogs are involved

Leo Jr. and Usagi Jr.?

where is this going?

but it's entertaining already

I laughed so hard

"intellectually charged" *lachflash*

hahahahaha! what a cute story! nwn

master splinter is wiser than wise!

and leo jr and usagi jr seem so cute!

LMAO! I love that story! It's so much fun to see just how it's been twisted around and how confused the boys are! LOL!

I have only one thing to say:

BWUAH-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

GO Splinter! I love it! Great ending. ROFLMSOBO. This deserves a nomination and a win! Love it. LOVE Usagi's version, that was EPIC.

Awesome bit of randomness. Great job!

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary

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Another interesting (and flexibly plausible) interpretation! Those poor children. xD So confused over a simple fable...although it's much more personal to them. I am glad the plot bunny was able to escape, Random. Your fanfiction has put a smile on my face.

~Dreamer

Haha i love it XD

Those poor boys really need to hear the real version of ' The Tortoise And The Hare'.

P.S.

I love the song ' Their Coming To Take Me Away.'

lol.

Intersting retelling of ' The Turtle And The Hare' .

Haha I am so glad you actually wrote this! It's amazing! I'm tired/sick so i only got to read the first chapter. I'll try to get on to read the second tomorrow. :) Love ya sis!

ROFLMAO! It would have to be the hare and tortoise that Leo picks for a bedtime story, wouldn't it?

Can we hear Usagi's version in the next chapter please?

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I really enjoyed this little interpretation of Aesop's Fable and the whole situation behind it. The tongue-and-cheek style came across very well. It was entertaining, and the diction was very good. It kept to a fable-style of storytelling. The ending was also wonderful with Usagi's underminding of the story! I'd be curious how Leo would react to the "real" version. Haha.