This story made me cry so many times i love this so much :'D i wish it wasnt over TT

hiya! That last line was so cute! Good story! (and im not just saying that cause im your sister) Dark, though. But its meant to be that way! XD

This is, by far, the best royai fic I've read. I don't know how I made it 'till the end, 'cuz I couldn't stop crying in the first chapters. You should really keep writing, and concerning your writing, yes, you CAN write to save your life. I can't.

Later!~ saya-plus :P

p.s. I loved it how you attempted to coax writers into reviewing on every chapter lmfao. I mean, you must have been pretty desperate to make an arrow pointing towards the review button, begging, and making...acronyms...? Is that what they're called? Anyways, you get the point. I just decided to review at the end. You wouldn't want a rabid fangirl promising your death for killing Riza and making Roy suffer like that in previous chapters. lol

p.p.s. See? I reviewed for you. I just wasted a good 3 minutes on your amusement. lol

Thanks dor this story . It was very touching

Sad, but great story )

It's... It's awful ! Poor Riza...

i like how the story is going although im still puzzled...

i think it was great but im still wondering how the story would continue without riza there...

What I said I mean it. Get her started on more awesome "one shots." Because we all know they won't stay one shots for long. *evil laughter fades in the background*

When I first started into this I wasn't 100% with you but by the end I was cheering from the sidelines too!

This was such a succinct and well written journey and I thoroughly enjoyed reading!

Bravo! :) Tell us you have another one lined up ... :D

I would do a real review and say how awesome this was...but this is what you wanted so... *yells angrily with fists in the air*

it's good but why isn't there royai in it DX

What? Why? No! Death? Dying? Why? Anywho, great story you have here. Made me sad when Roy died :( great work though. Update soon!

Why? Why? *tears* Why is it so short? Will there be another update for this and when? :j

Chapter 15 is so intense! I cried.

Fuery finds her? That's so sad...

You're mean, but I love you.