*smirks abit* I love how jelous james screwed jeff first,yet has the nerve to hate on tommy.

poor cops...if they HAD properly done their homework,they would know to NEVER bring Lawsons kids into things

I WILL FUCKING KILL CLIFF WITH MY OWN HANDS IF HE WERE REAL...SHANNY IS MY BABY TOO!HOW DARE HE!

tsk...they gave you a pass cliff...you royally screwed cliff.

...was...wondering when joie would be mentioned...FUUUUUCK! i dont care much for OC. but...fuck!YOU STUPID YA HAVE TO DO THAT?HE HAD SO MANY GOOD STORIES AHEAD OF HIM STILL.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!TOM!OH GODS NO

haha...silly needed to do more homework...threatening cooper and conner results in instant death(if lucky).alot of pain, THEN not.

oh you poor poor saps... 'threatening' copper and conner?uh oh...so much to say to that

r.i.p coppers...just doin their job sure...but they shoulda been smart enough to turn a very blind eye to the sexy lawsons. 3

darn those sexy lawsons...

The ending is so touching and beautiful. I'm glad everyone was there to lend Jeff the support he needs.

Will there be a sequel showcasting Cooper and Jeff?

Gotsta say I am impressed that you actually went ahead and killed off one of your main characters. Took guts and added a nice feel of reality and finality to the whole thing.

Great story, from two very good writers. I'll be looking forward to your next collaboration.

well don't know why you chose to end the story on such a asad note but oh well

Aw! so they are really together? YAYNESS! and I'm happy cooper and Mark made up! I still want some kind of sequel or something. I love this group of characters! Yall working together is AWESOME! I almost cried a few times cuz of Jeff's speech and the part where they gave Tom the belt and everything! Good job guys!

I feel guilty now cuz im the one who said to kill tom...I WANT ANOTHER STORY ABOUT TOM! ~cries.~ I MISS HIM TOO DAMMIT!