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Awwwww so sweeeeet :D I absolutely loverd your story and I really hope you write more x3 TeitoxMikage OTP

CUTE! OOC, but cute. You skipped lots of words though, and names were mixed around sometimes.

ehh Teito and Mikage are Tajio parents in this chapter can you tell me what will happen next am so interested on what will happen next and am a fan of Mikage x Teito too

aw! man am i going soft or what? oh what the heck great story! Totally made my day! :D

Good to know I wasn't the only one who was sitting there watching going "OMG this is too precious they are such a cute family!" in that episode.

I can see where you started slipping out of character, though the beginning was mostly on. Sometimes it's fun to write sheer and utter fluff (it's good for the soul, I swear), but it wouldn't hurt to keep in mind ways the story can be fluffy and still have them remain in character throughout. Part of Tajio's charm *was* that he was a little grumpypuss like Teito was originally, and that's the one thing I do wish you'd managed to maintain throughout.

All in all, though, this was a very cute story and I'm still kind of delighted to know I wasn't the only crazy person who saw the family vibe happening there.

it's so cute~ i 3 it.

Haii,I'm not a user of this site yet but i think that your story was awesome, and really cute! Don't worry your not the only mikage and teito fan! I would love to see more stories about these to and i will tell u my user when i join the site!

Too cheesy for my health !

Good story.. so sweet innocent! Well, the dream almost get M rated.. but still awesome! I love the Mikage/Teito pairing