Loved this story- your original characters were a great addition. Thank you for taking the time to do this and share it with all of us.

A great chapter!
Thank you so much for your story.

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What a great ending to a great story. Thank you for writing this!

Outstanding story! I laughed, I cried! I loved it! Can't wait to read it again and hoping when I go looking that I will find a sequel.

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This was such a great chapter, I don't think I've ever cried so hard but the way you wrote your characters made me so attached to them it's as if they were actually in the canon story and I applaud you on your story building and characterisation.

I have read your story 3 times now because it's just that good. Great writing style and telling of a story. Loved the characters you created :)

Thanks for sharing this story. It has a great ending!

Absolutely loved it!

I loved the ending. Harry was absolutely adorable.

snape, you dunderhead! lol! he using his own insult to himself.

I'm a little ticked at how emotional I got towards the end of this story. I loved how Snape overcame a lot of his character flaws in this story and became overall well rounded character. I also liked that Harry was a near perfect blend of both Lily and James so he's easier to hide with Severus, it was a very nice touch. Kudos to the Dumbledore smack down. I hate that almost no one calls out that as the strongest wizard of the current times why in the hell hasn't he even tired to get rid of moldy shorts. Anyways I really liked this story and am very sorry to see it end. Thank you for writing.

Great plot. I immensely enjoyed reading this story.

In my opinion there’s no reason to hit a child, no matter the justification. The thought of doing that to my own kids one day makes me ill