Just found this. Fascinating style of writing. Great plots. Hope you can continue it. Thanks

I liked Logan on CI. I would have loved to see him partnered with Eames for a couple of episodes or so.

I am one person who did not watch CI for Goren. I watched mainly because of Eames. I would get so angry at the shit she took from Bobby. It was ridiculous. I hated when he went with Leslie but was so happy she gave him the paper and left his ass standing there. I lost all belief (i know its TV) in him as a detective when he betrayed Eames with Nelda. Not even romantically, i am not a shipper. When Bobby knew that Nelda said things to pit him and Eames against each other that betrayed their partnership when he did what did with Nelda. No way to describe his actions with Nicole, that plot was overdone. I don't think he was in love with her, but his actions were not that of a veteran cop. Eames should have wrote him up and at least got him suspended. Its unbelievable what she stood by and took from him and her senior partner.

Your take on their story has been an adrenaline filled and uncomfortable ride at times, but, your skill as a writer has made it addictive. Epic story-telling. And unfinished. I hope you come back to complete this story someday.

You are one heck of an amazing writer! My only regret is that I discovered your work too late, years after you wrote it.

I love your beautiful, lyrical voice, your Incredibe insight into character, not to mention how skillfully you interoperable series Canon into your own original plot events. Your non-chronological structure is intriguing and contrary to what others may think, easily f

Great story. Come back and finish. There are still a lot of readers here but not as many writers.

Please finish this magnificent story! I'm anxious to see how it all plays out, especially in light of season 10.

I just spent the best part of an evening reading this whole piece. I have so many questions. I hope you update soon; it's terrific so far.

Paloma

Oh wow. I love the way this story jumps from place ro place. It's like a puzzle. And I love puzzles. Update soon pretty please! (:

Must go back and re-watch this episode. Wow.

I have so much love for that ice dancing metaphor that I just can't even... Guh. I have no words. You're so right. That's them-Like Torvill and Dean skating Bolero.

I feel like a heel for not having reviewed this before now, but...better late than never, yes? I'm going back and re-reading the whole thing because I think I got it all mixed around in my head. So I just thought I'd pause right here and say it's extraordinary-all of it. I can't wait to see where you go with this in the end.

It's great to see this updated. These two strong chapters were quite a treat!

First I want to apologize for not reviewing earlier. I don't know how I managed it but I was 7 chapters behind-yikes! Especially since I was bugging you at one point for an update...Anyhoo I am up to date now and all I am prepared to say now is WOW. I'm still trying to wrap my head around all I've read and all the emotions and questions it fosters...

I just really LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing. The only thing I wish is that I had a hard copy of this story so I could mark it up. You know, underline this, notate that, and flip, flip, flip back and forth to find questions in an earlier chapter that you answer in the latter. But as I said before, I am definitely reading this again when it is all said and done. This story is like the Bible, the more I read the more is revealed...awesome stuff.

Thx for 2 chapters within days of each other! Its great! Keep em coming. Just one question...I live in the southwest U.S...whats a cracker? We dont have those during the holidays here...