I love it. They way that you write this makes me feel...? I mean it actually makes me feel something, so you know that whatever you did, it was right. I found this story a very wordy, very deep... whatever you wanna call it. I think that it's kind of sad the way that you made Matt feel, about Mello falling in love with Near. Twas a good read. I approve. XD -thumbs up-

Mr. Review Button is green, not blue. He used to be blue and smaller, down in the corner, and then he moved to the middle of the screen and I kept accidentally fav'ing stories instead of reviewing them...:D

The pacing of this was just wonderful. It flowed nicely; not too quickly nor did it drag; though it actually took brain usage to read XD

I loved-well, *sniff* not loved T_T-B and A's little shoutouts. They demonstrate what happens to the "mishaps" in Wammy's twisted little world. The way you described B's descent into insanity and A's suicide was...shivery (and this is why I do not rely on mah Epic describing skillz)

The significance of whether or not one does something intentionally reminds me of Harry Potter, and how he had to kill Voldy but *not* because of the prophecy...just a thought. I liked it; 'tis important when someone acts unintentionally or not.

Then, when you described M'n'N's intentional/unintentional love ('cos there's no way it would ever be just one of the two), 'twas just so poetic...I think I said that before, but who cares?-you should hear it a thousand times. So purdyful...

XD and then the tone shattered and I giggled. Ah, Matty :3

I hope this review makes up, slightly, for the lateness/extensively short nature of mah PM T_T

Love it. Love it. Love it.

You used one of my favorite writing techniques (repetition) in this fic. I love that.

Excellent writing. ]

*covers ears* Okay. You can scream now. *grin*

Gawd, I actually had to use my brain with this one. Probably something I should do more often...awesome, though.

The bit about the suicide was kind of morbid...probably why it's one of my favorite parts. XD It's so clever... Ah, and then there's the part with the walls, and the caressing, and- XD Just realized. WALLS. So I take it they let you change your foreign language, then? So this must all be straight from the metaphorical mouth of the walls themselves... XP

MelloxNear ? *drools*

Thank you ~ !

Sound awesome so far, I love the line at the end. xD