Damn, that was good!

OH MY GAKJDFHLKDFJHSADLKFJHDSALKFJHASKLFSLDAJF
i'm so happyyyyyy

I just love some of your descriptions. Naruto's hair, bleeding at the edges; that incredible vista with the word 'aromatic'. The kisses. It was gorgeous.

This was funny and touching. The relationships are pretty complicated, but satisfying to read. Thanks!

THIS. IS. AMAZINGGGGGG! I don't know what I was expecting from this when it started apart from their romance duh but I wasn't sure at all how you were gonna make it happen! I love how it's sorta alternate universe but not really and naruto has his own genin team that's so adorableeeeeeee hahaha great writing!

So...pretty.
It comes together nicely, though I can't imagine how Sakura'd lived with Sasuke for three years.

beautifully written! I really love the dynamic between the two here and it's so beautiful! ;_;

Its funny how likley this is. everone running around making adult situations with childish dreams, only to realize that they have since grown out of their childhood infatuations. but you know how it goes, fairytales aleays have bullshit endings no matter how right things seem.

Sobbing sobbing sobbing sobbing
I don't want to be a blind fish anymore.
How do you write like this?
Please write novels. Fucking please.

Made me feel all squishy and good inside :) thanks for a good read

Made me feel all squishy and good inside :) thanks for a good read

OMG, I love this story! It's so heartbreaking in the beginning but the ending makes everything worth it! So beautifully written!

This is soooooooo good!

;D

Aaaw...a truly sweet ending.

You seem to love breaking hearts don't you? I read the prequel and this one. At the end of every scene I felt more and more hollowed. It was all so beautifully depressing. I don't think I would have been able to sleep if you had ended this story with a devastating final blow.

I will never ship Sasusaku but you did make me sympathetic to their relationship. Ofc nothing is ever quite as meant-to-be as the force that leads Sasuke and Naruto to each other.

I laughed a few times throughout this story too at some of the dry irony and sarcastic dialogue. Every good author evokes immense feelings from within their readers and I adore it when you fill up the bleak, dreary theme and let sparse lines of humour cut through. It's surprising and makes the situation that much more real. So dismal, but hopeful that change is still attainable.

wow tis is amazing...beautiful how you describe the loneliness in sasukes heart and the path that leads him to naruto w

AMAZING!