Reviews for Eleven Songs
Julie Sue chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
very different and very cute! i liked it! and I also like to read things from Logans perspective sometimes! :))
EvenAngelsFall22 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
So crazy. I just started a fic inspired by John Mayer and then I was page-stalking some of our shared readers' profiles and came across this as a favorited story, and I had to read it. It was, of course amazing. 90 minutes? I'm impressed. I'd have to say my personal favorite was "Half of My Heart" but I loved each prompt. This shouldn't be any surprise since I am a huge fan of your writing to begin with!

Nicole
Hyacinth79 chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
i know, i know. i must get a life! lol, well its a long weekend and my daughter is now asleep and reading fics is my guilty pleasure. actually i prefer to call em my bedtime stories. lol sometimes, while im reading ur fic and i see something i want to comment on i click on the review button right away to remind me that i have to comment on this certain line otherwise i'd forget. this is one of those times. i know u love writing logan povs and boy, u have no idea how glad i am about that. :D

heartbreak warfare: totally encapsulated the whole proposal disaster. i can see now y u used it for this fic. :)

all we ever do is say goodbye: omg, that last line, killed me. just totally wrecked me.

half of my heart: love this "mini title" it was another way of saying, to commit or not to commit. love it!

who says: i'll show 'em! lol

perfectly lonely: i'd prefer perfectly single but this is an oxymoron and i can see y john mayer would coin that title. smirking my dad owned my ass.

assassin: whoa! i was wondering how u were going to write about this one. i could be wrong but the way i interpreted it, it sounded as if logan was playing this game of selecting a target, aiming, and scoring! then that last line changed my mind. it gave double meaning to that word assassin as i thought rory assassinated logan's ass! lol, i meant, she assassinated his aforementioned assassin ways. ;) i ramble too much i know LOL

crossroads: reminds me of robert frost everytime i read about crossroads...two roads diverged in a wood..

war of my life: intense!

edge of desire: u say ur not poetic? take that back! this looks like a published haiku to me:

tapping that window

waiting for her

to let me in

do you know me: i like that this was short and sweet although i would have loved it if you added more. especially about their first encounter when he said, "u don't like me. u don't know me, but u don't like me". actually, i guess it was their second encounter. lol d-oh!

friends, lovers or nothing: wow! i can see now y u picked this album. it's totally bang on! every one of them! especially this last one. amazing! and ur creative mind totally picked up on those titles and related them to Rogan! can i say i love u without crossing the readership agreement? lol u are amazing! of course u know that already and have probably been told that like a million times. i just wanted to be the one millionth and one declarer of it. ;) go, you! :D

PS.

oh boy am i ever glad i copied this review coz i thought if i get timed out i don't lose all of the above! i am so glad of AltC. :D
michaychay chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
i liked this. it made me actually feel sorry for logan, and even like him! it showed that he was more than his name, and more than some arrogant ass.
MissGoalie75 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
oh wow i LOVED this concept. my favorite blurbs were 'all we ever do is say goodbye,' 'assassin,' 'war of my life' (i actually really want to write a oneshot based on logan's pov of that episode with jess), and 'friends, lovers or nothing.' these were really well written - i enjoyed them a lot!
zozo42 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
it was different but i liked it!

i hav this urge to go buy John Mayer's albumn now tho...good advertising for him:P

i love how pretty much ever Rogan writer writes about the same thing, he was a playboy now he's not blah blah but it's always different and interesting.

Yours was the ultimate of different.

Thanks for a good read:)
Betsy86 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I really like this. I'm not a Rogan fan, infact I hated Logan most of the time, but I liked this. I adore 'Battle Studies' and am found listening to it all the time. Good job!
SassyReaderGirl chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I really liked it. I agree that some songs fit better than others (I love this CD, I listen to it all the time), but it was overall wonderful. The last story is definitely the best, especially the way it ends. Please update soon!
mixxndmatch chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Loved it! I thoroughly listened to his new album & think the moments you chose in their relationship relate perfectly to each song. I thought it was pretty coincidental you did this b/c I swear, sometimes when I listen to his Continuum album(which in my opinion was way better than his latest one), some of those songs relate perfectly to Logan's POV too.

I mean...I Don't Trust Myself With Loving You, Dreaming With a Broken Heart, Stop This Train?...hello! I can think of moments for those too haha. But, my writing isn't too refined so I don't think I'd have the capacity to write even a one shot lol *hints that you should write a one shot for that album too*

Anyways, happy writings & update your stories soon! ]