| Reviews for Reflect |
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white pedal chapter 1 . 4/9/2013 Insanity at it's finest/darkest moment. Poor Ryou:( why does Bakura have to be so mean to him!? |
Haphazard Snow chapter 1 . 3/15/2012 Really nice fic. Your writing is just superb. Keep up the great work! |
looptheloopy chapter 1 . 1/31/2011 Okay, since I friggin' love crazy fics and whatnot (especially with the Hikaris and the Yamis), this is just... It's confusing, eerie and bloody brilliant. Mind screwing! Woop |
SnowLion no Miko chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 Aw, this was really sad. A good character piece. I think you did a wonderful job with this. |
darkest shade of red chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 hey im the 11th rewiever, now you even surpassed your goal - i loved your story it had so many feelings and was complicated. especially that you coulnt tell what was real and what was ryous imagination. the last setence made me shiver. I will never see the same in a mirror again |
Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 5/13/2010 Such a tortured oneshot! Poor Ryo. :( If I may quote a reviewer of my own (by name of "Airamana's Shadow"), "No matter what facade you placed in front of the world, the mirror sees what you really are..." You can't run away from yourself... |
Mahersal chapter 1 . 4/30/2010 Beautiful. Absolutly fantastic. The way the story flows and the feelings... You are truely gifted. |
Sinares chapter 1 . 2/14/2010 Wow, I never thought of mirrors quite in that sense. Wait, what I mean to say is that it never crossed my mind. You do have a point; mirrors aren't the truth, they're just illusions created to reflect what is inside us. Wow... amazing story! I expected nothing less. Great job! |
Black Lotus13 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010 Creepy... Very creepy...but, awsome at the same time. |
NightmareTroubador chapter 1 . 12/9/2009 I like your oneshots. They have very intersting quotes and go into things that most people don't take the time to think about. I think you should update somethings more but still keep doing these oneshots once in a while. I like them so don't totally abandon this idea. Your so good you've got me intersted in trying it out. Anyway, I'll stop rambling, the master and the reading demon bid you good luck. |
JiangShi chapter 1 . 12/6/2009 Wow this is an angsty, disturbing piece of work here, nice job! I could picture Ryou avoiding his reflection so he wouldn't see his other self. You did a great job with Ryou's characterization along with Bakura or "the voice's." Please keep up the great writting. |
ACE-in-Wonderland chapter 1 . 12/6/2009 Hm I like this idea of a "review goal"...puts it in black and white what you are expecting lol. Anyway, to answer your question, I feel it's best to compose what YOU are the most in the mood for. If you don't feel like formulating a plot, then on with the one-shots! If you have a killer plot that begs to be told, then go for it! And besides, I can guarantee you're not going to get one simple answer to this question. Just write something that YOU like :) And I like this concept of mirrors! It's a dual reflection of both Ryou and his darker half, who he cannot escape from no matter how hard he tries to "deny" it. I thought it was compelling how it appeared you made Ryou say something, but it was actually his darker half...at least that's how I interpretted it. I liked this because it was hard to differentiate between the two. Random note here, I loved how you described the shattered mirror as a "shower of silver." The imagery you throw in between Ryou's contemplations really add to this piece. Excellent job! :) |
Atomic Lightbulb chapter 1 . 12/5/2009 Brr. Really creepy. You've got first person nailed down, and it was really effective the way it wasn't really clarified when Bakura spoke that Ryou simply didn't think it was himself. Great stuff - I've missed your writing so much! I really do like your plotted oneshots, but these short little ones are nice to fill in the gaps between updates. Also, read your profile. RWV? ;_; Great story, as always! |
15animefreak15 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009 Wow, that was insane. I could easily see it happening... I actually prefer lengthy stories with a plot. Especially when it comes to Tendershipping. A nice, long story with a good plot and in-character canon is hard to find. |
scorpioryo chapter 1 . 12/5/2009 Excellent! You do have one or two puncutation errors, but I really liked it. My favorite part was the end! I think you're very good at writing these kinds of stories, but you should write whatever you please. Keep up the good work! |