Cute little one shot.

Nope, I do not care how much I loved someone, I could not and would not EVER put my child in that sort of situation. Once she found out she was pregnant . . . actually, once she was kidnapped by people left by someone Edward killed, I would have left him and his life behind. This is saying quite a bit, since I chose the childfree lifestyle with my husband. We love kids but, we never wanted them for ourselves. I digress. So, me saying I'd walk away, is a big thing. He'd have to choose his job or his child. He could walk away, his family would more than understand. Or not, if he states he can not walk away ever. It isn't like he is in the mob and has a blood oath done. He's a freaking hit man. That you can walk away from. The mob you can't.

I enjoyed your story however it felt rushed to me.

it was cute

This was an awesome one shot. I enjoyed reading this.

This has so much potential & could be a really awesome, multi-chapter story; but it isn't. This is more a summary of a really great story. There's so little dialogue, major aspects aren't explained (like why is Edward an assassin, beyond the whole family thing; who does he work for, how is Bella suddenly involved & their entire relationship is just glossed over...) there's so much left undone. This could be one of the fics commented on in the thousands if it was completed.

I want to read more of it PLEASE !

Real good

That was really a sweet little story, I loved it! And I think it was pretty hot and sexy Edward being a hitman.

I love your stories :))) 3

Wow that was different but I really like it...poor Rose can't have kids I think I'm going to look for a story where she is the mummy for once...Edward as a hit man is kind if hot (yes I need my head tested) lol

Great story!

grate story

THIS WAS AMAZING!

i totally loved it!

it was incredible!

Great Story :D