Yeah... I don't think I can really say anything that everyone else hasn't already said. Seriously, the writing in this tiny one-shot is hauntingly beautiful, with lyrical rhymes that give a sense of mystery and awe to the legend and reality of Laputa. It is like a grown woman telling her children/grandchildren about Laputa in many ways (at least, that's how I see it). Fantastic job.

Raika out.

Has anyone told you that your writing is utterly gorgeous? Because it is. This feels so lovely and gentle and wistful, but hopeful too. Thank you! (also sorry I suspect I may have rather spammed your inbox today)

only one word is needed. Beautiful. One more to describe that word, heartbreakingly.

I loved this story very much. I have a feeling it will stick in my soul for some time to come.

thank you so very much for writing this and putting it on ff.

Wow. Just wow...beautifully written and captures the movie perfectly. It really moved me, not only your movie, but the movie in general. I love it.

very good descriptions, and a lot of your sentences have this lyrical flow. you also can get into the mind of the character very convincingly...all of this is really well done. unfortunately, there is no plot, and sheeta is only reminiscing. no plot not a very interesting read.

however, I like your writing style, if you did another castle in the sky fic, I would definitely read it.