Reviews for Defloured
Xlerons chapter 1 . 12/26/2017
Granny's lived a long and happy life, she knows how these things work...
KittyKin chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
XD lol granny knows!
ImATrooper chapter 1 . 11/22/2017
i really enjoyed the dialogue in this fic, you write banter so well!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
funny, sweet, and romantic! you get an A

and OMG that last line from granny was so funny! XD

-ZeyTheFox-
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Talk about embarrassing! That last line though... That granny sure is something!
Tachiana Hon no mushi chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
...I feel bad for the apple piebut still loved it!
Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
XDDDDDDDD Al being snarky at the end was hilarious.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Elizabeth Darkly chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
Ha! Loved it! I kinda like the idea of Ed being a little (or a lot) pervy ;)
Rigby Gigby chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
Hahaha pinako that last line! Lol!
Nina chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
HA HA HA that ending was funny but overall this was an amazing fanfic.
Renae-Bookworm chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
Hehehehe...can't fool Granny!
RomitriIsMyMaximumMortalFlaw chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
lol loved it! I didn't understand the importance of the button flying off Ed's pants until the end. It was great!
LW12 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
great story
aeva elementia chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Loved this! Very neatly done citrus.
Breware chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Squeeing! Omfg! This is so adorable and fluffy and sexy, I can't even.
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