I thought it was great! But I honestly did think that the kiss came a little to quick.

Your Fan-fiction is amazing , i suggest your write more!
you have a gift at writing and you should use it also i like how you never leave the book boring and not wanting a person to quit reading it since it has such good detail and descriptions.
Good Work!:D

Well, I know he's going to become a White Knight.

Reading the whole fiction with cups of coffee was just aah... refreshing. Couldn't really veer away from the story, well I actually did once, but that was for dinner! I like Dustin, composed, multi-attitude like, and quite a joker even in fighting situations!

If I'd like to go on a date with one of the characters? Haha, none really, not to be bad or anything. )

I pictured the ending with no problem what so ever. (Funeral Scene) Even added an ending music to it. (November Rain - Guns N' Roses)

That's just me. Oh, I do wonder, would you give me permission to do some 3D models of your story? Like simple objects eg, (Rooms, silver feather, the tree Dustin and Jamie climbed up to, funeral. It would also help me train my 3D Modelling skill as I'm in the Visual Effects course in my College.

I'll read more of your stories! See ya!

Wait, near the end. My japanese isn't that good but did it say something like 'Are you Mainiac?' The kodomo part was where I couldn't translate any futher. Woul you mind pmming me the whole translation? Thanks and See Ya!

Garlic bread is AWESOME.

It sucks that I'll have to wait 'til the Summer for the ball to keep rolling T_T

Great funeral (or as great as a funeral can be..)!

I really appreciate you including my character Dustin in your story and I hope it continues long into War for the Sphere.

Well done, and lookin' forward to the next installment ;)

~Echo

AKA Dust Silver

An excellent final chapter. I felt strong sympathy for the different characters in the funeral (Gwendolyn in particular). You wrote the scene beautifully. I found the metaphor with the earth shedding its tears in the form of rain very effective. But this chapter has also got me feeling very excited about the future plans. I greatly look forward to seeing Emma and Dustin's adventures in the Eastern Lands, and I look forward to seeing the conclusion of the Mainiac97 plot line and the newly-formed Dragoxis plot line.

My favourite scene? That's a tricky question. I guess one of my favourite scenes was the scene were Kuro revealed that he was Dream from the future. It was a gigantic twist that I believe nobody foresaw.

You didn't answer my previous InterCom question about how Emma usually celebrates her birthday (a question inspired by the fact you shared about Emma's birthday being on April 1st).

So, in conclusion, great chapter dude, great story dude, and I look forward to seeing how your spin-offs develop and I look forward to seeing the sequel.

Until next time, toodles!

Nice chapter, as always. I'm eager to see how the story will develop from here, now that we've seen Dustin's origin and we are back to the present. The dream was curious... I liked the reference to Mainiac and our shared universe. I honestly couldn't tell you what the meaning behind the dream was, I haven't seen any hidden meanings yet (apart from the refernces to Kuro Ryu).

An InterCom question for you... you said Emaa's born on April 1st. How does she enjoy celebrating her birthday?

A character competition, eh? Here is my entry:

Name: Agilis Greenblade

Gender: Female

Age: 21 at the start of TSOV

Birthday: October 13th

Species: Human/elf hybrid

Description: Agilis is tall and relatively thin yet muscular. She wears loose, green garments made from silk, and certain parts of her body, such as her knees, elbows, shoulders and chest area are padded with adamant armour. She has smooth skin and prominent cheekbones. She is beautiful, but her beauty is a haunting beauty which can potentially inspire fear in her weaker foes. However, she can use her beauty if she wants to enchant anybody, perhaps as a form of distracting them. Her eyes are emerald-green. The weapon she uses is a mysterious, curved green blade which she stole from her parents (see history for more information on that).

Personality: Agilis is extremely elegant, well-spoken and formal; in other words, she speaks formally, even in the most informal of circumstances. She doesn't believe in justice or rank, therefore she treats everybody with the same contempt. A loveless person, she has no mercy and is awfully ruthless. She is hardened after years of great trial (see history) and is not one to take nonsense from anybody. She hates people who see themselves as superior to anybody with a passion, and especially dislikes the white knights (the commanders, generals (Solo included) and Sir Amik Varze himself in paticular). She is unnaturally calm and is not easily angered; when she is angered, she truly is angered, and can go into terrible rages.

History: Agilis was raised by very rich parents who held a great amount of wealth. They were unkind parents, however, and treated Agilis with no love. They acquired their wealth through decieving people and usually leaving them for dead, so Agilis grew up with a very stunted idea of justice; some might even go as far as to say she couldn't grasp the idea of justice. Agilis became a spiteful person and she left her parents when she was old enough. Agilis lived on the streets of Falador for a good number of years, resorting to thievery, trickery and even prostitution to get by. Years of trial on the streets made Agilis thin and gave her a strong physique. One of the few things she took joy in was agility. She practiced agility constantly and regularly visited agility arenas. Eventually she reached level 99 in agility and used stolen money to buy an agility skillcape. She despised the white knights because she felt that they were unfair, pompous people (especially the generals). She watched with contempt as white knight generals walked past her and stared down at her while she lived on the streets, something she despised. She used her agility to rob banks, burgle houses and she even plotted the assassination of several high-ranking white knights; these deaths were usually put down to accidents.

One day, she returned to her parents and killed them in their sleep, taking all of their money and valuable possessions, even stealing the ancient green curved sword that they treasured to use as her own. She renamed herself Greenblade because she wanted to rid herself of her parent's name. She managed to buy a house in the poorer part of Varrock, so she could plot the murders of white knight generals without being noticed. Of course, she recieved some amount of attention from gangs such as the Black Arm Gang and the Phoenix Gang, even being approached by assassins such as Boneripper. However, she was only interested in achieving her dream of killing Sir Amik Varze and fixing what she saw as a flawed justice system, so she declined any offers she recieved. She spends her time trying to fix the 'flawed justice system' through the means of murder, assassination and robbery. Sir Amik Varze, of course, would naturally be a well-protected person and plotting his murder would be no easy task, but Agilis is determined to be the one to do it.

Combat style: She utilises the curve of her stolen green blade well; she can hook it around the necks of her enemies. She uses her agility skill wisely by launching blindingly swift attacks in quick succession. She takes advantage of the space around her. She likes to leap over and around her enemies while attacking them so they grow confused and diorientated.

I hope you consider my request.

Until next time, toodles!

This chapter was one of the most touching chapters you've ever written. It really captured the pain I imagine most youths living on the street would feel. I look forward to seeing where this goes from here, now that Dustin has money, a sword and a goal.

Until next time, toodles!

Ah, so Dustin finally makes his escape. The scene with Val was really emotional, and in that situation I have no clue how I'd react. Let's hope I never find myself in a similar situation then. Well-written, and I look forward to seeing where the story goes from here.

Until next time, toodles!

Short Chapter

can you put strag in plz

Nice new chapter. You really made me tense as I waited to see if they'd eventually find the feather. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Until next time, toodles!

I've read all the new chapters that I missed while I was gone, and they were all lovely! I do miss Solo though :( But I daresay that I'm going to like this new protagonist just as much! Haha, it was sort of weird when I saw your author notes at the end of the chapter, because I was planning to do the same thing as well! I really hope you don't mind :)

-I'm horrible at remembering names, so please forgive me if I spelt it wrong-rather reminded me of my character's (Raven's) Aunt Elmira. I can't help wondering if Raven would have been sent here if her Aunt had the choice.

I do have a lot of questions to ask, so you'll definitely have something from me. I'll probably PM you about my own question-answer series, for some advice. Again, I hope you don't mind.

Continue soon! Sayounara!

-Noodle

Character submission.

Name; AuRon

Skills; Powerful swordsman and capable with the ancient magiks, shadow spells in particular.

Armor:Coal-black robe top, accented with flames at shoulders, black platelegs, carries a staff crafted out of dramen wood, but twisted and blackened.

good or Evil: Who has time for such things? I fight for my lord, Zaros, but that is all.