That part with the whore where he was like "light a candle dipshit" was just omfg! I legit couldn't stop laughing

This is a great story, it follows the movie while blending the new character in almost seemlessly

omg this story roxs i luv d storys were there r 5 fanastics though this is only the 2nd 1 ive read and i cant wait to read the sequel

hannah

I loved it! Oh my god! I haven't read the sequel yet, but if it's as amazing as this one was... WOW, I will probably love that one as well wont I!

A tall OC

Those are a very rare species

Thank you for that

I feel represented now

Let Go is one of my favorite songs. It's cool that you put it in there.

Hey, great story! I really enjoyed the addition of Helena to it. Keep up the good work.

Oh I love Johnny's line "OKAY WIDE LOAD COMING THROUGH EVERYBODY MOVE HE'S HUGE!" Hahahaha! Oh I loved that big update you did! Great job!

i love theses storys there so cute together )

Aw, she smacked him. How cute!(Translation: Yahoo! Go Helena show him who's boss!) anyway, please update soon! This is cool!

Hahaha, I remember in the movie when Reed is explaining about the risks, Ben just ate his fork! Haha! Oh great, now I have a metal taste in my mouth! Please update soon!(Which are really fast! Haha)

Hahaha! I love the ending! Anyway, im not gonna say it... Ok I will, PLEASE update soon? This is so cool!

Aw, the ending was cute. Anyway, please update soon! And your a screenwriter? Cool!

Wow, you are updateing REALLY fast! How fast are you typing and why are there no spaces between where people talk?

Wow... PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to hear Johnny say, "Too bad the doctors couldn't do anything to fix your face" Then Ben breaking the mirror, causing 7 years bad luck, haha!