Update...Update...Do it! Please...Love it.

Please update I love this story I have been reading it over and over. Your a really good writer

He doesn't have his abilities! LOL he's hungry for food not blood LOL. Rose has always been...loud about things. Lust? That's weird. Why did Edward's scent make him lustful? Edward felt the same way? That sucks, Alice saw it. Why did Emmett grab Jasper?

That would be different. I like the Edward and Jacob pairing, but Bella and Alice? I've never thought of that. That'd be cool to see your version of Twilight. How does this old lady know the Cullens? "my last gift" what other gifts did she give him? The lady turned Edward into a human. I remember that episode. The ending was sad. Will Edward stay human?

I really like this story so far. and i hope you add a third chapTER SOON

are you going to add a third chapter

So far tis story is good - funny - I like I have a question? What does this have to do with Jake and when will Jake make his appearance?

OH MY GOSH! U have to continue this story. it's amazing and shocking and down right a keeper. u shouldn't have stopped. T~T!

I'm totally intrigued with this story! :)

I'm really liking this so far. I wonder what Jake's reaction will be. Can't wait to find out!

oh what the hell is going on with Jasper? update soon

Hmm good start. I'm quite curious what will become of this story.

thanks for writing and posting it.

Will wait (im)patiently for the rest

This is very interesting so far!

I can't wait to read more.

Your story is very unique! :)

well holy hell! This perspective is a an interesting change! *smacks her forehead for lack of words* (don't want to give anything away in review...lol) Anyway, I want more...

I really really really like this story! please continue to update! I want to see wear tis will go!

much love

bre