Great fic. I loved the interaction between Leonardo and Ezio. I hope you update soon!

I love this story!

QnQ this..omg..this... Omg...-RIGHT IN THE FEELS-

For the language stuff, have you been using things like google translate because using that would really help. It makes things easier to find. I, personally when i bored, use the crap out of it, seeing if i can translate and entire poem or short into japanese or italian or german.

You are awesome at writing this stuff!

No big deal. This is only the single most beautiful Ezio x Leonardo story I've ever read in my whole life. I laughed, I cried, I was angry, I was sentimental. I suffered secondary embarrassment and fear like it was I who was in danger. I mean, Lord bless your soul. The ending scene had me in sad, happy, sentimental tears. Ezio's repeated failed rescue attempts were the perfect way of jerking the reader on. The willingness to sacrifice and to die every day for love, the raw portrayal of the Assassin's world, the painfully beautiful way you have voice to Leonardo's fears were splendid. Flawless story, absolutely no flaws. I mean, you beautiful creature, you. There needs to be more authors like you in the world. 1,000 points for you. I feel like I don't even have a vocabulary expansive enough to express my feelings for this story. God bless you.

[Leonardo thought Sister Teodora, prostitutes, and aphrodisiac in one single logical train of thought and flushed. "No. And I think that you are the victim of a… a prank, they stole your pigeon and changed the message, that drink will be, will make me do things I will regret. That we will regret."]
NOPE NOPE ALL OF MY NOPES *Runs*
xD
Teodora, Rosa, and Antonio! You trolls!

this was the first AC slash fanfic that wasint pure smut it actually had a story and i had a lovely time reading it thank you. oh btw i also missed the part of hugging leonardo where u gotta press the button i was so disappointed.

Wow, this story was lovely, riveting and so many other words that I'm really too tired to use. I've just started reading the Assassin's Creed fandom and I have fallen in love with Ezio/Leonardo along with a few other couples, but this is my OTP. You are a very good writer and I would like to read more for and thus I will stalk your profile for more stories.

roflmao, why does this chapter remind me of the Da Vinci Code? I love this story, it's marvelous! Poor Rosa. *snort* what, that templar is feeling Leo up, after accusing him of sodomy, but still believes Rosa is his sweetheart? Coincidence much xD but fun.

WHY CAN'T I STOP RE-READING THIS STORYYYY

I've probably re-read it about five times now. This is like, a perfect Ezio/Leonardo story. I wish you would write more of it but I'm not you're master so I can't make you do anything XD

Here I go again, with my newly, self-infamous: 'I noticed this while rereading' tirade.

"He hopes that it was quick for Ezio, that there was no suffering."

I can't help but reread it, over and over, and ponder over how Leonardo must feel right then. The emotion you have conveyed in this pairing, in both this story and the Sword, is quite over-powering. That single line, that single sentence, speaks louder than most of the rest of this chapter, of this intro, and possibly of this whole ten-chaptered story. It's the simple things that bring the most impact. It's the simple things that make people think. The simple and the sad.

I don't know if you're still active on FFNet, but if you are, I hope you get to read this. I hope that you take my advice when I say that you need to publish, something, anything. And tell us all when you do.

With love,

Alixra. :D

Yet another marvelous story. I love how you went farther with it than you intended, and the results are aboslutely excellent. The element of danger you added made it even more thrilling. Thank you for taking the time to write for all of your readers. :)

I'm sooo in love with this fic right now. x)) The relationship between Ezio and Leonardo is so sweet and fluffy (loves fluff :c)! And you portrayed Rosa's character amazingly, I loved reading her match-making plans. xD

I will be continuing this, just wanted to comment on this. I'll be reading more soon! :3

I love doubleleaf! And you! So talented, it scares me. You people are awesome, for sharing this with the world, and in turn, me.

I hope that at some point, you update this story.

~Vithian

I love Rosa. Usually I hate female characters because they get annoying. But I love Rosa. I can actually picture her perfectly in my head. It's great lol