It's very well written, and explains a well detailed story, very romantic, finding someone of such brute strength to show affection. Well done!

Daw...I found this to be very cute and heart warming. Verg truly needs more love, especially after what happened to him. I love that manga/anime so much it hurts.

Oki, when I think of her, makes me almost tempted to draw her. Feline..dolphin..human. Rather interesting if I do say so myself.

UGH VERG. I wish to hug him D:

Very nice and original too.

I really like this fic cause Verg is my favorite charcter but ... it just doesnt sound like Verg at all. I don't think he would EVER say "please" at all because he is WAY to stubborn. And he isnt yelling at all. I kno hes tired cause he hes been cryin alot but, he would still yell. you didnt add any "!" or use capslock at all.

example that he would still be yelling:

when haymi is still tryin to yell Verg what Zorndyke said:

hayami: "these are the words, your papa told me..."

verg: "you lie!"

hayami: "..." (uhh i dont remember what he said...)

verg: "YOU LIE!"

hayami: "try to understand one another..."

verg: "NO YOU LIE!"

he was still yellin even though he was in pain(both phsically and emotionally) and tired

im not flaming at all just tellin you that he sould have been yelling(even to his own kind ex. mutio)

That was freaken 't I tell you not to write u bastard?

Cryptic Darkness, please email me. I want to publish your fanfic in my website, and I want your authorization. Thanks!

i love this story it's sweet!

yeeeeeeah damn all the peeps who hate verg to hell!

verg is the best!

DIE HAYAMI!

Thanks for the fic. I do appriciate it, but could ya place me in the story as Verg's Queen , cuz I am, and I don't mean to be rude, but I am kinda protective of it, so if ya could I would appriciate it bunches!, thanks again, later.

he he he he he he he he he he.

Why Thank you...

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fear my mate Verg, for he is GOD!

oooh, i love this story, i agree with you and the Tatathia person,verg doesn't get enough atention, and just because he hates humans and beat the crap out of that guy, and hurt mutio almost everyone hates him. i rather feel(the way u stated in the begining of ur story) the same way about kino, mutio, and verg.

Interesting... And good. *nod*

* trembles, throws head back*

WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! That was so sad! Verg does NOT get enough attention arround here!

*purs* I am pleased. Finally someone sees Verg as I do. Very good I must say. _

I'm not usualy a fan of verg. but wow you captured him awsome. I do enjoy it when people write about the guys in the story that usuualy have an abusive atitude because they CAN love, hey I love gwing, zechs and people think he's a rapist or something. I love the fic, you really should write more, I'll look forward to reading it when you do. ohh and if you have time please read my stuff if you would. thanks, kira