I can see why you stopped writing these. They were all kind of boring with OP characters all over the place, and kids getting one over on people with years or decades more experience than them.

Awesome

Damn

so funny. an idol to fantasize about is much important than the one who save their lives or ended the threat for them. meaning their lives are worthless than their idols

This was really interesting. I've found several great SG1 crossovers, and this felt like it had real possibilities.

Love this one ...

Nice! this is a fun little story.
I also really like this crossover in general.

I wish chapters like we're published as independent one-shots though. Then we cod find them by searching for this specific crossover, especially since this has a completed narrative.

I love the ending and the interactions between Harry and Inner Moka.

hoooooo great

great great

I'm so glad after the last story of yours I read I checked if you had any other works.

You're the only fanfiction writer that can make me cry and like it, this short in particularly- I hope you keep writing long into the future and that you let us know when you've moved on from fanfiction to write best selling novels.

Liked very much this compendium so to speak.

Nice. Recall reading a Lovecraft story like this

Absolutely loved this fiction.

I would love this to be continued

Just a quick note to say how much I loved this one. Great writing!