nice i had hoped to see faramir explain to aragorn about his wounds. But i like this story very much.

Wonderful! A few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but otherwise amazing!

This story is amazing so far! I love love love your portrayal of Faramir so far!

I've just finished this story and I still enjoy it. I like your perspective of Faramir as the one who went to Rivendell. Superb job.

I think I loved this story. I actually just started to write a lord of the rings fiction in journal format, and seeing this makes me appreciate how good of a writer you are because it was executed perfectly. I also want to acknowledge your date keeping, cus I am to lazy to truly look things up like that. Faramir is one of my favorite charactors, and to see him portrayed so well was awesome. I really did enjoy reading this, and I read the entire thing in a day too. And now that just sounds sad...but it got me happy again so all is good. I also loved how you portrayed the relationships within the Fellowship. Not a lot of fics show that, which is a shame because I know from experience that being with a group of people for a long time as they were and going through things even of a lesser importance to war really does bring them together. I will leave of with a heart felt thank you for writing this!

Slight issue with a bit of rehashing.

Gandalf essentially ignored Faramir's question about Shadowfax.

When you have an elf and a dwarf in a boat situation, if there should be an incident the blame was placed squarely on the dwarf.

It would be best if you wrote out the numbers. That way you will not start a sentence with "2,000", as that's very bad form.
Besides that small discrepancy I adore this story! It's a fresh change from the exhausting amount of Legomances.

Truly an epic tale !
And I always loved Faramir so much, I would have gone and killed Peter Jackson myself for what he reduced him to be. "I would not take this thing, if it lay by the highway." Indeed ! And here he was on the screen, feeble and full of fear, bringing the Ring to Olgiliath ! What a shame !

So, truly : Thanks !

***Pyrane***

Not bad.
Borys

Wait. I just realised something. Where did the Uruk-hai come from? Minas Tirith is a walled city, and while the gate was broken, there have to be guards there. Surely somebody would notice a giant mutated Orc running around the first circle. ••

I. LOVED. It.

-Silver

This is an excellent story but please note that the olog-hai are actualy a breed of trolls, not a breed of orcs as you wrote; the word 'olog' meaning troll in the black speech. Please refer to Appendix F, Section I which states ''But at the end of the Third Age a troll-race not before seen appeared in Southern Mirkwood and in the mountain borders of Mordor. Olog-hai they were called in the black speech...in fashion of body and mind quite unlike even the largest of Orc-kind, whom they far surpassed in size and power. Trolls they were, but filled with the evil will of their master: a fell race, strong, agile, fierce and cunning, but harder than stone'' [page 1106 of ''Return of the King'' -Collins modern classics edition]

I liked this.

This was a good chapter. Can't wait to read more tomorrow.