Loved the story. It was nice to have a story that mostly focuses on Roxas. I love Axel but he felt more like a secondary character in this story. It was refreshing!

Axel and Roxas are just so cute x3 and screw Vexen and his creepy stalky ways! At least Roxas was finally able to stand up for himself.
Are you really going to write more chapters for this? I think it's fine the way you have it now, but I wont object to more. I just love these two and your writing so much :)

Hi I am getting permission to read fanfiction on youtube. Would I be able to read your story?

At first I thought it was a typo, but it repeated. So I would like to tell you that you spelt "barely" wrong. Stop spelling it barley. It's a little thing, but it's pissing me off. Story is good so far.

Today is Fanfiction Appreciation Day and for that I'm stopping by to say - again - how much I love this fic! It's been 7 years and still I come to read this every now and then again and again, as I can't get enough of this fic. If anyone ever asks my fave fic I always name this, though I haven't been active in KH fandom and I'm not that big Akuroku shipper - but this fic is pure gold. I'm so happy you have written this! Thank you so much!
Cheers, Niu

I'm doing what I normally do about writing reviews of fanfics: I'm writing at the last chapter haha.
But TCaTR was an amazing story. It grabs your attention from the get go, my only issue was having Cloud be depicted like he was. Yes he's an asshole, he's strict and cruel but then again, it's your story. A good one, at that. I hope you get back your inspiration for writing again soon, I can't wait to see what you write next.
XOXO
Raevyn Michaelis

I see. I see what you did there. Except the roles were reversed.
You nearly brought tears to my eyes with that one line.

Aww thank you so much for writing this *makes weird hand gestures*... thing! *sigh* I'm really bad at phrasing things sorry XD ANYWAYS. GOOD FIC. YEAH.

Nonononnonnononno

This story is so sweet... I read through the entire thing in almost one sitting. 3 3

I wish Riku had been more talkative, but that's just Riku, I guess. Lol.

Thank you for writing it!~

We're celebrating Fanfiction Writers Appreciation Day at Tumblr (21st of Aug 2015) and I have recommended this fic for my followers! I hope as many new reader as possible would come to read this fic of yours and enjoy of it as much as I did! Here's the feature link: post/127246256558/fanfic-writers-appreciation-day-recommends Cheers! Niuniente (NiuNiu)

I re-read this fic after a very long time, and I had forgotten just how good and entertaining this is! I'm forever in love with punk Axel. FOREVER.

I forget if I've reviewed this before, it's been such a long time, but I'm still rereading this fic over and over again. This was the very first fanfic I've ever read and because of you and this wonderful story is the reason I write now-literally. You gave me that little bit of inspiration I needed. This story is so beautiful. I'll never forget how this story changed my life and let me do what I love. uwu

Ahh I'm excited to see them get together! Idk how I feel abt this timid Roxas though, he's usually super rowdy and bratty in all other fanfics I've read haha. But a change of pace is nice!

I like the character development because you can already see how Roxas is starting to like axel and disobey his dad!