holy shit, this is amazing. so very amazing. A!

This is very well written, hot, and oh so very engaging. You portray Adachi to a perfect T. Absolutely loved it.

Woah. Perfect ending. Adachi's point of view is always so interesting, since we see his true colors. You wrote him very well.

love love love love hmhmhm yes.

You don't see many stories for Dojima and Adachi but when I do find them they're usually pretty good! I really liked the feeling of this story too.