This is so sweet it legit made me cry, I love it so much!

"the two of hearts."
Oh wow, I just noticed how cheesy that is.

Okay, so I finished your last chapter, right? But literally as I was reading the last bit of ch. 4, P!atD's Impossible Year played. Best mood setter ever.

You are the best nerd I've ever had the pleasure of reading from.

Awesome!
:3

SO MANY FEELS KAWAII AGHHHH FEELS FEELS FEELS ASDFGHJKL

Mrs. Reynolds... I see what you did there.

This is so cute!

Loved how Billy saw how you can't fix evil with evil, he is way too smart not to have seen that. He also saw his second chance at happiness and unlike Darth Vadar, he took it :) My heart was so pleased with the ending.

Penny's reaction was in character and great. I liked how she didn't vehemently deny it or become disgusted but instead saw the truth.

Love how Penny and Billy can be their true selves around each other, makes their love even better and healthier than it seems in the musical. Like Penny's view of Billy and her realization about Captain Hammer, she is way too smart to not have seen his nature sooner. The horrible line, priceless! Lol

Another good chapter. Shows Billy's undervalued sweet nature and how he truly wants to make a difference. It also makes Penny less of a Mary Jane and more of a strong woman who can change the world, one soup can at a time.

Great start! I liked how you had Penny see what was before her eyes and talk to Billy about his injuries. Ending with hopehappiness :)

I cried a little bit at this beautiful ending. This was so sweet and adorable and Captain Hammer is a corporate tool. If you ever write a sequel, please do let me know :)

Omgosh! This was so cute!I saw Dr. Horrible at a-kon on saturday and adore it! 1st fic of this fandom I've read and this was brilliant!