Holy shit, it's over! I love that line. This story gave me an adrenaline high, or fanfic high, or something. I flat out stayed up multiple nights to finish it. I am a little disappointed that there wasn't much ancient language magic slinging in this one, but I can understand and appreciate your logic for not doing it. Apart from eragon, saphira, and murtagh being the heroes instead of link, this stor is indistinguishable from the others I've read, and just as satisfying. I hope you do write the sequel, because I'll be downloading it as soon as I can find it. This story reminds me of the first fic I ever read, digimon saga. Captivating, riveting, and so much more. I couldn't wait to see what happened next. I almost believe that galby, as you call him, was really a slave to ganondorf all along, it was that good. The land guardians of alagaesia flow seemlessly into the twilight princess story, and not just anyone can manage that quality of writing. I'll choke off the praise there, but holy hell it's a good story. I add it to my collection, and will reread again.

Well, you wanted a review, so hear goes. I've just started this epic novel, and I'm only on chapter 4, but I like what I'm seeing so far. You seem to be a very tallented writer, and I'll try to dispense with my usual dramatic reviews and just say that your story is captivating. I have a habbit of name dropping, and I'll dispense with that as well. Suffice it to say that I find this story just as good as others I've read and reviewed. I like long involved intricately plotted out stories, and the original inheritance cycle left me a bit unsatisfied. It wasn't bad, but it had some plot holes and areas where it dragged on and on. Your story doesn't. I can't wait to see how Eragon and Saphira do in hyrule. I hope he hasn't lost his magical ancient language tallents, though he probably doesn't know the name of the language in this story, and I'm not even sure magic will work in hyrule or if it will work the same way. I hope others have left reviews of this and other stories you've done, if you've done any, but if not, if you've a mind for a sequel or another tp or loz fanfic, I'll be first to r and r. Keep up the captivating work!

I'd just like to say that i love all your writing. Don't think i've commented before but i've read and re-read the Sunrise and TRR stories over the years and i always enjoy another visit to the worlds you bring back to life. Keep writing! I want to have more to read in the years to come! 3

Thou is the object pronoun, all three times you use it as the possessive pronoun. It should be "thy quest", "thy purpose" and "thy forefathers". Every time you would say "your" you say "thy", every time you would say "yours" you say "thine" and every time you would say "you" you say either "thou" or "thee" depending on whether the pronoun is the object or subject (like the I/me distinction ie. "Thou hit me" and "I hit thee").

Straight up cried. Srsly, there were tears.

Beautiful story.

I'm really sad I made it to the end of the book. I'll just chill here listening to Deadman's Gun.

Thank you for such a beautiful book.

- Lonewolf848 Avid book reader and 8 year Roblox vet.

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you know that would be an interesting story idea. having the bearer of wisdom or courage being corrupted instead of power.

Seems promising!

what about beor?

soooooo epic boss fight in future?

They're goddesses for goddesses sake... I love this line

I love this story! So good! Aside from occasional spelling errors and misused words, it was perfect.

To point 4: Doesn't Saphira count as animal and shouldend be affected by the shadow real otherwise the transformation of Eragon into a dragon wouldn't make any sense ...

Holy shit I can't believe this is finished - wow. Just wow. This was such a good ride and all of the changes you made to the canon were totally justified and really fit the story. So thank you for writing this bc it's been one awesome time.

Awesome job and I can't wait to see how you tie everything together. Making Murtagh have the triforce of power was a nice twist and I'm wondering if you have a sequel planned for the future. Until next time...