I really want them to be secretly dating... You are by far my favorite author for fanfics! I love Rose and I love this series!

Lessons from Snape, awesome!

I have to say I enjoyed reading Fire and Ice year 2 but think you may have to do some major editing and rewritting. I hope you don't see this as a flame, as if you do rewrite this I look forward to re-reading it.

…are you going to rewrite this one anytime soon? Not that it's not good, it's just… more of a plot outline than an actual story…

good story! a bit short, but a good story. i like the way haylee gets along with snape, thats a nice twist!

I can't even read anymore or i will go crazy! Really, you finished your first story in about 2 weeks and got reviews that really could have improved your writing, but you completly ignored them. SLOW DOWN AND TAKE AN EXTRA DAY OR TWO TO WRITE AN ACTUAL CHAPTER AND NOT A SUMMARY! Last time I checked, this was fanfiction and not rewrite J.K. Rowling's stories with an extra charcter, but lacking her talent in writing. If you want an example look at my Harry Potter stories. My one with only one chapter is as long as your first story! This may seem cruel, but it is the plain truth!

Short, choppy, vauge, and completly boring.

" Oh shit " is right!

I was wrong it can get worse. i couldnt even make it through this one. I had to just skip to the end, it was that bad.

I'm debating to even consider reading your third.

God i love it chaps are little small but still...

more! more! more! i want more! great story! i love haylee!