You are such a talented writer. These 6 chapters have been great, amazing. I know it's been many years since you last updated, but I hope you come back to this story.

I was so pissed when I got to the end and realised it wasn't complete that I nearly broke my keyboard writing this review. Your story was that good. It was a bit weird though it started out as a extremely humorous and slowly. Got more emotional. Well done. You fooled me twice and I still like this story

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D: awww poor Merlin...
Good story though!

I vote for slash. When do you think you'll be updating again?

you better update this... this is incredible, beautifully written with so much detail. i love the plot line and i just neeeeeed to know what happens next!

Wow, I can't believe how much I like this story. Update soon, please.

Aw, how sweet. I love the girls' friendship with Merlin.

Hah! Merlin got trapped shopping.

Ooooooo interesting

Um, is this actually the same story? Because it doesn't read like it.

Also, please don't make this in to slash. Arthur and Merlin have a brotherly-like bond, they are not in love with one another, soul mates, or anything else. They love each other like family, that doesn't mean it's romantic or sexual.

Just read this! Awesome stuff :D absolutely loving it! Please update soon, I'm seriously psyched to find out what's going to happen next :O ;)

Oh, geez, this is sooo good! I wonder where you are taking us with this story? The writing is truly remarkably, the characters well drawn and the plot is original. I can't wait for more of this delicious story. I'm truly hooked. Great job!

Awesome chapter! I really liked Lirin, and Merlin's magic vision thing was epic. Things aren't looking so well for Arthur ): thanks for reminding me about the finale of the show a bit...
I can't wait for the next update!

Wow, those years have changed your writing style for this piece a bit. While the first chapters had a definite humorous style to it, the last chapters have become more adventure/novel-like, if that makes sense. But i'm glad you haven't abandonend this story because it's concept is quite interesting and the reveal very orginal. Your writing is good, it's easy to read but not being a native speaker i cannot really judge any grammar and such. The only thing about the characters is, that Morgana is wearing an enchanted bracelet (i assume the one she got from Morgause) but she seems too kind to be in the fase of becoming the witch Morgan Le Fay. Is this on purpose or am i reading too much between the lines?