So...I'm a huge SN fan as well. I'm biding my time waiting for your Shield/Dean stories to be updated by reading your other "Dean" stories lol This one was great! You captured the characters very well! I'm sad I didn't find these earlier in life when I would search for SN stories all the time. I'm glad I found them now! Going to check the others out as well (after I read your new update from today, of course!).

after reading like 4 of your stories, i've come to the conclusion that i think i love you.

Fun story! I really enjoyed Sams confusion and the memories he would get from nowhere. Good job on the writing. It was easy to read and made you ache to find out what was going to happen next. Keep up the writing.

i really liked what you did with this story. it was differant. good job and great way to end it!

Hi there, just read the entire story and loved it! Thanks.

It was an awesome story. You did a great job with this!

:D I loved this fic! Brilliant! Awesome! Wonderful! Yeah, you get the idea. (: xx

aw it over! i ...have...a bittersweet feeling? im estatic to noe sams ok and they are a famly again but im sad its over if that makes sense?

I really loved the premise of this story.

Ahh, so the humming was the electro-magnetic field, not the bee skep they kept out back hey? LOL I actually have read/seen a bit about memory transference although I can’t remember much about it…no pun intended

Anyway.

Great story. It was really well written; you could tell you put effort into the plot making sense, there were no loose ends, lots of action and good grammar.

The boys were well characterised. Dean was for sure, Sam was when he was not someone else. LOL.

Great villains. I really love the human baddies the best. You did a good job of humanizing them enough that they didn’t seem like the over the top, twirling their mustaches kind of bad guys.

Jed was fun and made a great oc.

And I for one, really enjoyed the mystery element you had. I just have fun guessing. Makes it a bit more case fic feeling instead of just whumping…not that I’m complaining about the whumping. Don’t get me wrong. Whumping’s fun too.

All around great story and fun story.

This story was fantastic. You really captured the dynamics between the brothers, from their banter to their feelings of guilt.

Can't wait for the next fic.

I was just going to have a quick look at your story and maybe read later - I've had to read the whole thing and I'm now late for work! You will be named in my excuses! I really like this - good plot and characterisation, nicely paced and I like the light touches of humour. (a bit of hurt Sam is always a bonus too) I think Jed is brill and should probably have his own series. I'm now even later - damn you and thank you

Oh! I think the giant coffee I had kicked in and my brain might be working a bit. The fact that Sam doesn’t know what’s going on helped a bit too. LOL

Could it be Jacob’s ghost was actually possessing Sam? Or trying to anyway. The pendant is holding it there? Or forcing it to stay there? And that’s why Sam doesn’t remember any thing.

So obviously it wasn’t working very well because Sam’s memories i.e. Deans music, were seeping through.

I had assumed all this time, that Sam had a spell to cloud his memory to make him susceptible to what they’ve told him and I just couldn’t make things connect. Although I’m not sure if they’re connecting yet.

I still don’t know what the power is for but I’m going to guess still it was to somehow call Jacobs ghost or attract it or something to that affect.

Who knows maybe it has nothing to do with it at all and they were stealing power from the local transformer and all that humming is the bee skep they keep out back…. Lolol

Anyway more rambly guessing, which, I mean I could have just waited one more chapter for the explanation but what’s the fun in that.

Ok. Another great action-y chapter!

Belle is a total Froot Loop. I Really enjoyed her and Isaac as baddies.

Poor Jed, glad the old boy didn’t get himself shot.

Who could not love Dean coming in like a vengeful warrior to save Sam when Belle was going to shoot him(although I was hoping for a misfire but you know, not in Sam’s pretty face, somewhere in the shoulder would have worked.. lol)

I actually felt a little sorry for Isaac when he lay there dying and his mother is calling for Jacob. Poor messed up guy.

Isaac’s little insane call, for his ma to punish Jacob/Sam like last time, answered the question of just how much of an accident Jacobs death was and who did the killing. I appreciate when loose ends get tied up. Stuff like that will bother me Forever. Seriously.

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Ok I have wracked my brains and admittedly it was like two thirty when i read this last night/morning but for the life of me I can't think what the power lines, humming, emf and jacobs pendant could possibly mean.

I'm assuming the humming is a massive amount of power and somehow its helping fuel the spell or whatever on the chain but "how" is what I can't figure out. Unless they have all the ghosts captured somehow...maybe the power is holding them there... I don't know..I know when you explain this i'm going to feel like a total idiot cos i am fairly positive the answers staring me in the face. I love mysteries btw even when I am being too dumb to figure them out. lolol

Ok I didn't mean to ramble on there. Oh Jed to the rescue! I expected that it would be him, although a little part of me was hoping it would be Sam even though I knew he'd heard the shot while still in the basement.

Nice bit of action. Fights were well done and not confusing. I love Jed. He's a good little bit of comic relief. Love Belle loseing it when she realises Sam was not going to be Jacob either.

So the chains off and I wonder how long before the effects of the pendant to fade.

I'm very curious to see the next chapter.