Holy hell, I found it! I love this story! I read it on my cousin's computer (As she saves the ones she likes) And I've been looking for it for close to six months! PLEASE UPDATE MORE!

I call first Review!

Anyway, I like the plot. Looks like Kendrick's a pretty awesome guy, but he has his demons too, which makes it all the more interesting. He also acts all tough but he's a softy on the inside. I was surprised at first by how different Vesta is when she speaks from when she's thinking.

Your action scenes are great too, and even if they have a bit too much of blood, we all know that we love it. (We humans are just that bloodthirsty)

The 'there's no rules, so I can Flare Blitz your ass if I want' theme is pretty awesome too; sometimes I get pretty pissed off when a pokemon is getting owned and the trainer can't do anything, or rather doesn't want to forfeit the match. Without those rules you can kick the pokemon to distract it, or throw rocks at him XD.

I'll see you next chapter!