I started crying somewhere in there

ahhhh i loved this so much! its one of those stories that really left a great impact on my soul and that'll make me remember it for countless years to come. thank you so much for writing this awesomeness author-san! God bless your soul!

Omg I loved this. I have goosebumps, I love your stories I especially love Kanda and Allen OMG this made me so happy, thank you

Be still me heart. That was a heart ache and a half. Emotional rollercoaster much? Seriously though, amazingly written

That was just... TToTT Damn it! The feels!
I kinda half expected/wanted allen to die ...just when kanda comes (I guess I was that pissed off from what he did)

holy shit! this gave me some serious heart wrenching moments. i literally felt like my heart was breaking along with Allen's when Kanda kept rejecting him.

awwwww :3

This is good! First of all, I loved the consept! It's unique abd cool. The characters aren't ooc either which is wonderful. Though I might add that the sex part isn't that much realistic. I mean I have read men have sex and I know how it was supposed to go. They need lubrication for preparing, lots of them, also they are supposed to insert at least 3 fingers in and prepare thoroughly until pain isn't felt anymore. Usually the bottom would need to clean but since this is a story it's better if they didn't. Having no lubrication and enough preparation would.. make Allen feel like he's being ripped apart abd he would surely scream in pain. I also think the ending was a bit rushed, like you still haven't conveyed Kanda's feeling clearly.. like he was really just bounded by the string.. I would like it if he really loved Allen but just don't voice it out. Because no matter how annoying Allen means to Kanda, Kanda always help Allen with remarks such as 'stupid moyashi with hero complex' or something. But besides that this was really good :)

this story was beautifully crafted, and i enjoyed the various nuances of the mood and tone. the romance between allen and kanda was believable, and the tension almost palpable at times.

good job!

Make this a movie!

Love the story!

omigod your awesome that was the best! I was crying so much and then yyaayyy so happy right now ﹏your awesome

Aah I knew Kanda would come around...though I don't feel like forgiving him just yet fr hurting Allen like that in the beginning but oh wel..that's Yuu Kanda fr us ::-D the fic's beeeeeautifful btw...truly very beautifully written...I was moved to tears :-)

WAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! QAQ I cried at the end... That was just so... So... Beautiful... TAT

That was beautiful...I'm crying bucket of tears right now T_T *sob*. Thank you for sharing this story...you're truly amazing