Such a strong start to this story, brilliantly written to tie in with 'Incubus' I would love to see you finish!

Wow!

I didn't think someone would write this, but I'm glad you started!

There are just a couple things.

The actual Incubus fanfic says Cam's straight and there was no love interest between him and Sasha.

And before you post each chapter you should have someone look over the writing for spelling mistakes. They're almost everywhere.

Other than those two things, I love the story! :D Keep writing!

Sorry, took me forever to finally get to read this after some hectic days, but it was short and sweet and always appreciated.

Incubus the book has gotten to when Sasha sings the lullaby that Dean remembers Mary singing to him as a little boy. But in the book Nathan hears Sasha singing a version I wrote of the Old Irish Prayer. I wanted to share that with you, though I can't quite share the melody in my head, lol:

May the road always rise to meet you

may the wind be ever at your back

may the rain fall softly upon you

and the sun shine warm upon your face

And true be the hearts that love you

may the hands of friends be ever near

And until we meet again...

May the path light up clear before you

and the clouds forsake the skies above

may life's joys be pure as they surround you

and the stars shine bright to guide you home

And true be the hearts that love you

may the hands of friends be ever near

And until we meet again

May God hold you, hold you in the palm of his hand

Thank you for the inspiration!

Oh, just COME ON! Cant wait for a real chapter!

I think you have a full enough plate that it's okay you don't get to update much. I'm always happy to read something. My poor baby though, what was he thinking! Lol. I'm interested to know what is meant by everything going black...then white. Hmmm...

The plot thickens!

Yay! Youre not dead, after all! I almost gave up! The beginning is great, Sasha sees Malak, you gonna face him in the future, baby.

And I loked Mike, and Sasha being a tease...drol...Anyway, Dont hold to long to update!

Yay, it lives! Not that I mind one bit that you are focusing on Patient 13 since I love that just as dearly, and will be reading that next.

So much drama for my poor baby to handle! But as much sympathy as there is for Max there at the end, my favorite part was definitely Sasha proving his natural coloring. :-)

So glad to see more of this! Love it!

I like the way you made Sasha miss Cam, it nice, maybe some more fluff for a fan? Both your stories are good, update.

I had read most of this when you posted, but couldn't concentrate well enough to review. Now I have finished it and am feeling a little better.

Yay, the stage is set for Sasha's first hunt, and with a very interesting mystery man, Maxwell, who can sing. And I LOVE that song choice! I am highly intrigued. And I loved the addition of OCs that Shiarra had hooked up. Very nice touch. I'm excited to see what happens. I'll try and get to the newest Patient 13 tomorrow. Need to nap...

elmo, now i won't be able to watch sesame street with my nephew without laughing and my family will think i'm nuts, thank you word demon!

I feel like the hunt almost has to go horribly. :-) But how cute that he got himself caught in a Devil's Trap right away. He's off to a good start now that he isn't moping anymore.

Since Sasha doesn't have the necklace that Cam gave him in present day, are you going to have something happen to it?

I always imagined this part as more of an announcement, with Sasha nervous but hoping that his friends would understand, since everyone would already know that Deklin was a hunter, including all the counsel members. Solaris wasn't considered a pariah the same way even though everyone knew Deklin was a hunter, because the counsel and others looked at it as a hunter becoming an incubus and assumed he would therefore give it all up. Sasha choosing to be a hunter is a big blow then, and knowing that Deklin never gave it up, which is why Sol and Dek died.

But I did like the confrontation between the boys, especially Lin plowing into Sasha because he WOULD.

One thing, the women in Sasha's family were a blonde, a brunette and a redhead. Sasha's Mom being the redhead, SABINE being the blonde, and Shiarra has BLACK hair, remember?

Aww, my poor baby, out in the world now. Can't wait for more!

Its awasome! I think, maybe you should continue the idea with Sashas advantures at young age, there is this part in "Incubus" when Sasha tells Dean that he killed a girl by acsident...Youre doing great! Waiting for a sequel!

And here I was anxiously awaiting disaster when Sasha spills that he's off to be a hunter. This was good fun though, very wonderfully detailed. And I love the mechanism. Works perfectly with the lore. The counsel is a great mesh, I think, too, of different personalities. I cannot wait for the end of the prologue. You know I love this because I just jumped with excitement to see the next part up.

Poor Cam...

As a tarot reader myself, you did a marvelous job on that reading. Bravo. And well done on Pamela! You nailed her, and I just adore her character anyway. That reading was so chilling. I love how Death can either mean Sasha's actual death, which does happen, as well as so much change, including the change ahead. Awesome.

Oh, and the picture, realizing that it was the picture Lin eventually gives Dean to give Sasha has me all teary-eyed now. Best chapter yet! I cannot wait to see what comes next? Are you going to undertake the change itself and all that glorious, mostly mindless and hormone driven sex?