Reviews for Retsu's Folly
Spellflame chapter 13 . 7/27
Update?
NineYetis chapter 13 . 7/20
Damm. It’s so good. But is so dead.
use1 chapter 13 . 7/9
just finished ch. 13. this is awesome.
Lordlexx chapter 5 . 4/6
You know.. since this is in English, you switch the names around to the western format of given name first.
So long ago chapter 1 . 1/18
Really good story.
MartianGod chapter 7 . 12/15/2019
you know, it just occurred to me that Harry is a hypocrite. He is supposed to have gone to Voldemort prepared to die and accept Death with open arms as a friend. Yet, when he finds himself in the afterlife
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 10/23/2019
I don't think this is the top rated story in this particular crossover for no reason, but I just can't get into it. The first part of chapter one was certainly interesting and I was fully invested in seeing the dynamic between Harry and Retsu... but then you introduced Rangiku which ruined the good thing you had going. You told us a dark period in the characters life was coming up when you sent him to the bloodiest district in the afterlife. And then just before you delivered you had Harry conveniently stumble across Rangiku getting r*ped while Gin was off somewhere. Ok. Then you had her join him in his journey through the bloodiest district. Did you just stop caring about believability so you could develop this romance subplot? Retsu had him master Kido and contact his swords spirit before allowing him to go anywhere near these dangerous places, but this fcktard just randomly decides to bring an untrained companion along just because? Bullsht. It's not believable at all and it ruined the rest of the story when she started appearing in this chapter every 5 seconds. And a quick look at the future chapters showed that she'll be around for a long time too. Just... no. You have to do a better job introducing a character than that if you want people to like them. It can't be full of holes, it can't contradict tones of arcs that you heavily suggested were going to be one way(and then weren't), and you certainly can't do it at the expense of the main characters intelligence. It's just not the right way to go about things.
Kipplee chapter 8 . 7/25/2019
This Harry is a Bi polar psychopath
thelordofmango chapter 13 . 7/22/2019
I like this.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2019
Great story
kirashu chapter 13 . 4/12/2019
I like this story, i freaking love it. The relationship between Harry and Retsu is amazing, the new dynamic with Aizen is interesting as well. I am not a big fan of "Annette" but yeah, this is an interesting story.
My only problem is: no new chapter since 2014.
Hope to read more of this story one day.
dylansandy1993 chapter 13 . 4/7/2019
I would love to read more of this story!

This has been one of the best bleach fanfictions I have read. This may be because the AU atmosphere, while being capable of being almost synchronized with canon.

While life goes on, and this story is one of many that has not been updated for years, I would love to have it be updated. Heck, I want to see him actually mature. A harem is the only possible relationship he has available.

A harem managed by his goddess of course. With Retsu as the only appropriate candidate for the second wife.
Oddballzebra chapter 1 . 11/15/2018
I'm pretty sure you just need strong spiritual pressure in order to get into the academy.
nikprosta chapter 13 . 10/29/2018
This is really in needing of an update!
One of my fav fanfics so far!
objectivepersona chapter 13 . 7/18/2018
This story is great, the writing is deep and thoughtful, the main characters, Retsu and Harry, are fleshed out well. it's too bad it hasn't been updated. I could see a harem in the future too.
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