Wow. Loved everything but I'll try to pick a few. here goes, the Yuffie/Squall/Aerith part was portrayed perfectly, I was so sad! I love this new Rinoa girl, and Kairi's flashback was awesome!

update soon :)

"You're late, yo." Made me laugh so hard! :)

It took me a moment to remember that this was a kingdom hearts fanfic- the mention of Donald and Goofy had me confused for a second!

I'm just trying to figure out how you make every detail come alive...well...that didn't really make sense, but I can totally see this writing style in a best-selling novel one day...trust me! I can read the future! I promise!

To paraphrase Mrs. P- Good thing you didn't choose a friend that picked on you and made you fell bad! Right, FP?

Love Always,

DBD

PS Did you know if three people sit in a circle, they're all sitting next to each other?

AWESOME~! UPDATE SOON~!

Ok, now for the good. (I didn't mean to sound so mean, I'm sorry)

I love Yuffie, I like her character and her stubborness. The faeries are cute, and Rikku is like that friend we all have who is never quiet. ;)

I was thrilled to see Merlin, I was like, "I know him!" so I don't know if he fits in any more, but he could, just saying.

And now I understand the ratings, thank you all for warning me beforehand.

so good!great control of suspense,it never slows down! i love Yuffie and Squall and the ex-fairies are really funny ;)

I don't like you

You hit people with cotton candy

not that i would know! ;0p

I decided to hold off on any commentary until...now.

First, what is this from, Final Fantasy or Kingdom Hearts, I'm completely confused. However, I now understand Yuffie and Merlin, otherwise I'm lost. The prologue didn't match the first two chapters, I get the reference to the key that the boy had at least. I don't get how all of the characters connect quite yet either. I know it's all in your head (and in a video game too no doubt) but I need more clarification por favor.

It sounds like a really cool story, I just am a little lost.

Oh, and Death by Default, how do you know whats going on?

COOL~! UPDATE SOON~!

Ah, great ending! this is my favorite of yours so far, I like the

switching view points, they add to the intricate plot. can't wait for more :)

AWESOME~! BELIEVE IT~!

I LOVE YRP! THEY'RE SO CUTE AND FUNNY~!

YUFFIE IS GOING TO DIE! BUT I LIKE HER!

But knowing you, you'll find away out of it!...actually, knowing you, you probably already know how to get out of it!

I'm really looking forward to it...

I really like Cid and Leon...Cid made me laugh!

0P

Sometimes I read a story and think, "Wow that author is a good writer, I hope they decide to write more..."

With you it's like, "Wow, she was born to write, I hope she lets me read more."

Because SOMEONE never lets me read what they write!

I give this story Fifteen stars out of four point five.

15/4.5!

This could be fun!

UPDATE SOON~!

I love the way that you bring attention to every detail, and make everything seem like...well I can't describe it...but the way you write lets people visualize in their head...OH I'm not saying this right! Well you did a really good job, and I'm dying for more...you'd better update quickly or I'll tell you know who that you thought she looked fat in third grade!

If I didn't know you better, I would've though you took this directley out of a book...:O)